DnW Poetry Contest #2: Pain On A Pouring Rain

in #dnwpoetrycontest7 years ago (edited)


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Pain On A Pouring Rain

Gone are the days when we’re side by side
Missing the moments that to you I confide
I try not to glance, I try not to glare
As if Im walking in a tunnel of despair

Arrays of dark and black fill the silent room
No words can ever explicate this gloom
Laying in bed at night alone
Wondering why Im feeling like a stone

Clouded with thoughts like waiting in the sky
And pondering everything is a trivial lie
People keep on asking me why
All i know is, without you I could just die.

This sentiment is too much to take
My heart is fragile and now it begins to break
Turning a blind eye to the cause of pain
And letting it out together with the pouring rain.

My entry to DnWPoetryContest initiated by @kneelyrac and @deeday31. :) I used the 3 quatrains for the other poetry contest I joined and I thought of using this again for this contest. hehehe I hope you also like my sketch, too! I tried so hard for it. Lol

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luhhh uiii

yes na hahahaha

may pinaghuhugutan? nice kau! clap clap clap! 😊

wala naman masyado hahaha thank you! :)

I can see the passion just by looking at the drawing.

ka charing ba ani uriel oyyyy hahaha pero thanks hahaha :D laban lang jd ta ani dai.

Very very deep and lovely poem

Your creativity is wow!
Thanks for sharing

thank you! :)

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