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RE: ADSactly Short Stories - Twenty Minutes

in #fiction7 years ago

Derrick reply should be to fat guy
"a parallel world"
Though firstly I thought story looks a mixture of Inception,journey 2 ,avatar.,but when I kept going further it gets some turns thats interesting
Indeed it's a good story to read.especially the protagonist Derrick seems very brave & logical in prejudging the situation.i almost though he would gone in when the time shows 2 minutes,looks like he is the master in engaging while coming across some of the weirdest sensitive situations.
Perhaps the fat guy get some push,&might be looking forward to the expedition next time.😊

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Hello @iamanwaar. After hearing Dericks's response, I doubt the chubby guy would ever want to have the experience. :-) Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.