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RE: Fifty Word Challenge: Submission 01

in #fiftywords7 years ago

This is wonderful. At first I thought it was about a prisoner serving a life sentence and looking beyond the fence at some chickens. And then it suddenly clicked. Well done!

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I'm truly pleased you've enjoyed the piece, and that I could hold the element of surprise till the end.

You did indeed!

Thank-you @jayna, much appreciated!