🎵 “Right Inside” (Original) - Live Music for Hive Open Mic 79

in Hive Open Mic2 years ago (edited)

Hive Open Mic ( #openmic ) is a global community celebrating live music on Hive. Each week is a new event, encouraging musicians to share songs with an international audience.


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This week's Hive Open Mic theme is: "Mirrors on Earth." The song I'm sharing here speaks of the mirrors I see in the four elements: earth, water, air, and fire. I see that I and my surroundings are much the same. The rain cries. The breeze breathes. I am like a garden, growing and flourishing. I am like a stallion galloping, a kitty purring, and a choir singing...

Lately, this is the song I sing most often. The reason is because it is a total joy to sing. I like the way it stretches me in the higher notes, and invites me to improvise a certain howl in the spaces between stanzas. Today was my first time looping the song in this way, which allowed me to give multiple layers to the howling sections. That turned out to be a lot of fun for me.

I'm presenting this performance raw, uncut, because the looping is simple to see and hear. In other looping songs, I add lots of layers, and that potentially creates a lot of redundancy for a listener, so I usually chop it up to keep it short and simple. But today's feels pure, so I'm sharing the entire performance, for the first time. To me, it's a sign of progress in this new style of musical expression.

Another sign of up-leveling in this video is the treatment of vocals. Always before, when I use the looping station, I relied on a feature that autotunes my singing, even though it sounds kinda funny because it basically amplifies my voice while also duplicating the voice with enhancement for automatic pitch correction - the resulting output sounds kind of robotic. Here's something that feels more genuine.

Most of all, though, it's the message that makes this song so special to me. It's a positive affirmation that essentially says, "All is well." Because I see that "all is right" in my surroundings, I can believe that all is right in me. This feels like good medicine for today's world.


Right Inside

All I see is right inside of me
Garden rooting down and flourishing
Stallion galloping kitty purring choir singing
Truly we are one for we are earth

All you see is right inside of you
From the mud the water lily blooms
Rain dropping vapor rising teardrops flowing
Truly we are one for we are water

All we see is right inside of us
In the wind the leaf returns to dust
Feather waving limb swaying breeze breathing
Truly we are one for we are air

All we see is right inside of us
By the smoky flame the cedar comforts
Sun shining ember flaring lightning striking
Truly we are one for we are fire

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Hive Open Mic - Week 79 is underway right now, with the current theme: “Mirrors on Earth.” We introduce new themes every Sunday, inviting musicians to share a common current. Musicians always have full freedom to bring whatever music feels inspired in the moment. There is still time to jump in and enjoy this week's Hive Open Mic event!

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You are right about your voice, here it sounds AMAZING, besides you sing with a feeling that transcends 🙌💫.

Like all your songs, I loved this one, the lyrics in general are spectacular, but in particular I loved the 3rd stanza, very pleasant and relaxing images came to my mind.

Cheers Bro 🍻 have a nice weekend 🏜️🌊🌬️🔥🎙️🎸🎶🌍🌎🌏🌌🙏❤️

I'm happy to hear of the pleasant and relaxing images. Thank you for sharing that with me. I feel so blessed to know you, brother. I'm grateful for your camaraderie, and glad we can bless each other up with our musical gifts.

I will tell you this anecdote: The images were from a moment in my life where I had a lot of peace, in my old home in venezuela, close to the trees and watching the clouds go by while I found figures in them hahaha, I still do that, but that day was the closest I got to touch the sky... and I remembered it just when I was listening to the 3rd verse of your song 🙌

I feel so blessed too brother, here you have a friend of music and life 👊😎🔥🎙️🎸🎶❤️

It's really good of you to share these inner visions / remembrances. I'm so happy to hear this music made an impression on you, bringing you back to a precious moment in your life. Peace be with you.

Same to you brother, Thank you 🙏🙌🔥❤️

Como siempre un gran trabajo hermano, un abrazo!

Me encanto esto que acabas de presentarnos, me encantaron tus aullidos como le dices😅 tu música me transmite tanta paz, que a pesar que ahora hace mucho calor, deje de sentirlo😂, siempre es grato escucharte. Dios siga bendiciendo tu espíritu creativo. Bendiciones🙏🏻🤗🎶

I loved what you just presented to us, I loved your howls as you say😅 your music transmits so much peace to me, that even though it is very hot now, stop feeling it😂, it is always pleasant to listen to you. God keep blessing your creative spirit. Blessings🙏🏻🤗🎶

It is so kind of you to bless me up with your words and your well-wishing. I'm so glad you feel peace and pleasantness. It is a blessing to be your friend and experience your sweetness.

Es muy amable de su parte bendecirme con sus palabras y sus buenos deseos. Me alegro mucho de que sienta paz y amabilidad. Es una bendición ser tu amigo y experimentar tu dulzura.

Wonderful song hermoano! The lyrics are so poetic and the melody conveys a touching calmness, it is truly a beautiful prayer.

Aw, your words really bless me up, brother, thank you. I'm glad you can see the prayer in it, and the beauty. Peace be with you.

Oh, tus palabras realmente me bendicen, hermano, gracias. Me alegra que puedas ver la oración en él y la belleza. La paz sea con vosotros.

Awesome moment listening to you sir.

This is pure Musicality. I feel the life in your voice sir, you are a blessing to us on this platform.

Thank you for your music originality and administrative supports. @cabelindsay

Thank you so much. This one felt pure to me too, and I'm so grateful to you for noticing that. I've been working to hone in on my sound, and I think this one is the closest to achieving what I'm aiming for. Thanks again.

@cabelindsay muy hermosa
tu interpretaciónn 😃 me gustó mucho 🎉☺️

MUCHAS FELICITACIONES!🤗✨

Muy hermoso, me encanta esas combinación de voces, son muy agradables para mis oídos, me encanto, felicitaciones @cabelindsay Dios le bendiga

Thank you for listening, friend. Hugs. God bless you and your family.

Gracias por escuchar, amiga. Abrazos. Dios te bendiga a ti y a tu familia.

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Friend, you are right that the most important thing here is the message of the song, it seems to me that it totally represents you. You can tell that it was fun for you to add some layers of voices, the song already has something mystical and the harmonization embellishes it. I think that of all those who participated, this was the presentation most in line with the theme of reflections of the earth. How nice that you dedicated a different verse to each of the elements, and the image that you gave us this week has also been one of my favorites. We missed seeing you around here.

Thanks for saying all of these friendly words, encouraging me to express myself musically in this way. I sure appreciate it. I'm grateful to you for welcoming here, just as you do for so many musicians. You're a good friend to me. I'm proud to call you my brother. I'm grateful to be able to learn and grow as a musician right alongside you.

Rain dropping vapor rising teardrops flowing
Truly we are one for we are water

This line I loved so much..

Really brings the earthy thing to light.

I ll love to see tour gear.. Any post you mentioned it..I ll be glad to have a link.

Great song @cabelindsay your creativity speaks a lot about you.

Cool! Thank you for resonating with the words. I do have a post that shows the gear I'm using: https://peakd.com/hive-105786/@cabelindsay/the-awe-the-ease-original-live-music-for-hive-open-mic-62. Wishing you joy.

Thanks so much
I ll go over there to take a look.

Excelente, master! Un nuevo hermoso tema espiritual aquí. Esta melodía me suena como el soundtrack de una película que me va a hacer reflexionar mucho. Siempre las melodias son las que atrapan toda mi atención, pero esta vez la percusión jugo un papel muy importante aqui, suena "sabroso", como diría yo coloquialmente. Por otra parte me llama mucho la atención la posición y el movimiento de la mano derecha que usas para arpegiar...Se ve cool. Un abrazo y Bendiciones infinitas mi pana

Excellent, master! A new beautiful spiritual theme here. This melody sounds to me like the soundtrack of a movie that will make me reflect a lot. The melodies are always the ones that catch all my attention, but this time the percussion played a very important role here, it sounds "tasty", as I would say colloquially. On the other hand, the position and movement of the right hand that you use to arpegiate really attracts my attention...It looks cool. A hug and infinite blessings my Pana

It's beautiful to feel you with me, brother. Thank you for witnessing me and my growth as a musician, and for allowing me to witness you in your musical journey too. I feel so fortunate to have a friendship like ours, where we can express ourselves creatively and get to know each other genuinely.

Es hermoso sentirte conmigo, hermano. Gracias por presenciarme a mí y a mi crecimiento como músico, y por permitirme ser testigo de ti también en tu viaje musical. Me siento muy afortunado de tener una amistad como la nuestra, donde podemos expresarnos creativamente y conocernos genuinamente.

What a beautiful song, I can say that one of my favorites so far, what a beautiful message! it's like that, we see what we are inside.😍

Thank you, sister. I feel lit up with pleasant feelings whenever I sing this song, because of the sensation that all is right: it's alright: all is well. You're so cool to give us a theme that invites us to identify the reflections we find between our surroundings and ourselves. "Mirrors on Earth" is one of my favorite prompts so far. I'm grateful to you.

Mi querido amigo @cabelindsay, quiero felicitarte por esta gran creación, me encantó que hayas incluido en tu letra cuatro elementos importantes como tierra, agua, aire y fuego, nos hiciste parte de ti en cada estrofa y es así, todos somos uno. Toda la letra me encantó. Las voces wue hiciste fueron muy bellas crearon una atmósfera ideal para este tema. Dios te bendiga siempre.

We are all one.

Right! It's cool of you to see this underlying message. It's so true! Physically, we share the same elements and that means we are made up of the same, all interacting with the same, and experiencing the oneness in so many ways. And I so love to think of the oneness we all share and bless it up with the positive affirmation: We are one and all is well. Thank you.

Todos somos uno.

¡Correcto! Es genial de tu parte ver este mensaje subyacente. ¡Es tan cierto! Físicamente, compartimos los mismos elementos y eso significa que estamos hechos de lo mismo, todos interactuamos con lo mismo y experimentamos la unidad de muchas maneras. Y me encanta pensar en la unidad que todos compartimos y bendecirla con la afirmación positiva: Somos uno y todo está bien. Gracias.

Que lindo pensamiento, te felicito amigo, si todos los seres humanos pensaran así, el mundo sería distinto, sigamos luchando por la unión y el amor a la humanidad. Un abrazo.

This is a masterpiece! We missed an original theme from you and with your signature style. It's impressive what you achieved with the loop and the final result is an irrefutable proof of your talent as a musician and producer.

We never get tired of listening to you and enjoying your music, we love you. Take care of yourself!

I sure appreciate your compliments, you're the best! It's good of you to notice this performance, because it feels like a breakthrough for me. I feel especially happy to see signs that I'm finding my distinct voice as a singer. So fortunate to have musical friends like you to show me some new ways to carry a song, and stretch me to try new things.

Excellent song, it is beautiful to see how everything is taking shape, the arpeggio of the guitar takes its style with the chosen percussion and the voice everything is conjugated to achieve this beautiful song, I congratulate you my great friend, thank you for the choice that I was chosen , for me it is an honor to be part of this group of artists, to choose the theme of the week 82 I have chosen "stories of the night" they can be stories of love and adventures that usually take place in those nights out that appear without realizing it Greetings to all and I wish you many successes

excelente cancion es hermoso ver como va todo tomando forma, el arpegio de la guitarra va tomando su estilo con la percusion elegida y la voz todo se va conjugando para lograr esta cancion hermosa, te felicito mi gran amigo, gracias por la elccion que fui escogido, para mi es un honor ser parte de este cuadro de artistas, para elegir el tema de la semnana 82 he elegido "historias de la noche" pueden ser historias de amor y aventuras que se desarrollan generalmente en esas salidas nocturnas que aparecen sin darnos cuenta, saludos a todos y les deseo muchos exitos

stories of the night

Oh man, that's a good one! Thanks for offering a theme that is fresh and exciting. Thanks for being a friend to me, and to this community. I'm so glad we can get to know each other across any distance through this sharing of a musical vibration, and a genuine connection.

historias de la noche

¡Oh hombre, esa es buena! Gracias por ofrecer un tema fresco y emocionante. Gracias por ser un amigo mío y de esta comunidad. Estoy muy contento de que podamos conocernos a cualquier distancia a través de compartir una vibración musical y una conexión genuina.