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RE: The Horrors of Kwiksave: The Date (Part Two)

in Writing Club2 years ago

How sweet! I have been waiting for this and almost missed it! Isn't love special? I love puppy love and I love first dates, not then, but now looking back.

The jamming the tongue down my throat. It can be so unsettling, especially if he doesn't know what to do with it. I mean, you are young and the dudes are new! What do you do with it? Enough tongue play and he will think he's getting lucky.

He's not.

This is memorable. I really look forward to the next one. I hope to keep Barbara alive and well!

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I have been waiting for this and almost missed it! Isn't love special?

It was very special at the time. You don't forget your first one.. ever.

Sadly, it didn't last forever but did beyond my Kwiksave tenancy. I haven't seen her in years.

You NEVER forget your first love, it is true! I still hear from my first love in the form of a Christmas card, every year. I think very few first loves do last.

Thanks for taking the time to post this with many upgrades to the script.

Thanks for taking the time to post this with many upgrades to the script.

There is a little left to this story.., but the last year was somehow more blurry than the rest. Fewer changes of staff and Dire outlasting me did it!

Dire outlasting me did it!

No way!!!!