5 minutes for Bliss

in Freewriters2 years ago

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The rock of the boat is like a mother lulling her child to sleep. The door that opens to the balcony is heavy, too heavy to stay open on its own. They do that on purpose, of course. In case of storms, and flooding and all this. But I break the rules, and put the heavy chair in front of the door so it doesn't shut.

I want to hear the ocean. Want to hear it calling to me, over and over, longing for me to come out and greet it. Asking for me to visit. Teasing me to feel its spray and smell the salt and hear the soothing swishing of the sea as it laps against the hull.

It's dark. Everyone is sleeping. I'm not. I'm always awake. The darkness in the middle of the ocean is so thick - it has weight, and texture, and it clings and cloys. I love it. I want to be in it. I creep out of bed, and disguise
the creaks of my steps to match the creaks of the ship. No one will know that I'm sneaking to my secret rendezvous with Poseidon, where he will soak me from head to toe in sensual bliss.

End 12:51!

Well, that was a lot of fun! Hi my sweet friend @mariannewest hehehe Did you think I had fallen of the face of the earth? Well, I'm still tethered here. LOL Though- as you can see from my 5 minute prompt, I would love to be floating away on a ship far off the coast where no one can find me. hehehe

I have been challenged by @samsmith1971 to WRITE MORE. hahaha So - I thought, what better way that to jump back in with a quick little 5-minute prompt that never fails to surprise me with how EASY it is to give me a jolt of creativity!

thanks for this - and thanks for always being SO diligent and dedicated to keep these coming! hehehe


The post was written in 5 minutes, but the rest came later! I found a picture and added the personal note to Marianne AFTER the 5 minute freewrite! hehe

This post was an entry for @mariannewest's Day 1641: 5-Minute Freewrite for Bliss. If you'd like to join in the fun - you SHOULD! HEHE It is a FANTASTIC way to START writing without any kind of massive, stressful expectation. You just show up - write what you can in 5 minutes, and post it into the community. Go read others to encourage or get tips - or just ease your way in... Whatever! Just enjoy the process of writing for the JOY of it!!!

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Oh wow, thanks to @samsmith1971, I have a new post to read on dreemsteem's blog today and leave some encouragement... Hehehehe... Well done, Sam.

I hope one of these days your wish will be granted. You'll follow the sea as she calls to you and listen to her sing sweet melodies to your ears..... Until then, be well, ma'am. 🥰

Yep, I am sure you already know what's next.... Had any physical activity today? How about your doze of water? Anything that gets you closer to that gold star, go on, do it.... I am rooting for you. 💪💪💪
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hahahahaha yes - i had gotten my star for yesterday and I'll begin with my water and meditation in just a moment so I can get started on my star for today! hehehehe

and yes - the sea will have me again hehehe She is a temptress LOL and that Poseidon is quite a lover.. ROFLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

and how about you miss iska??? are you almost to your star for today?!?! heheheheh you are ahead of me in time - so you've had an 8 hour start on me! LOL

Me?? I just ticked the last box for the encouragement.... I dreaded that part throughout today... Lol... I thought I wouldn't be able to nail it ... But just a few seconds ago, I ticked the box that had Deraaa's name as the last person on the list🙈🙈

The only thing I have left on my plate is submitting a post to dreemport and finishing the complete doze of water for today. 🥺

I am sure you'll finish those tasks too, you got this. 💪💪

Well I guess that answers my question! You're an old hat at freewriting. I'm so glad you have dropped in on us and left us this gift of a story.

hehehe yes - you and I have interacted a loooooooong time ago! gosh - maybe 2 years ago now?!?!?! but i remember your name! hhehehe thank you for the compliment - and yes - it was fun to get back in there and freewrite - I'm going to do more today I think... need to keep those creative juices flowing hahahahahaha thanks again! :)

That was lovely. Wonderfully written for 5 minutes. I do enjoy these little freewrites... although I figuratively tore up my first attempt this evening ... ie@ hit the delete button !LOLZ. Tidying up the second effort and I will post it... we have a similar night theme 🤗... but I have no boat no ocean no Poseidon!!! haha... This was great!!! You know I love your writing. !PIZZA !ALIVE !LUV

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hahahaha I love that we were both finding our bliss in the night! did you post yours yet??? hehehe i have to go see it now! LOL and thanks for encouraging me to write!!!! these are the best little nudges to get creative! hehehe

haha still procrastinating...it will be up shortly... I'll tag you !LOL ... and please keep writing, pretty please hehe

hahaha i am due to write some more!! i actually wrote 2 other things this week - but they are on another account - and this one is super super secret ROFLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

but i AM writing lol

That sounds wonderfully blissful! I also love the ocean.

hehehehe its one of my favorite secret spots.... on the balcony of a cruise ship - in the middle of the night (preferably when there is a storm far in the distance so you can see occasional lightning!) and just cruising slowly - back and forth.

there is really nothing quite like it... you feel so peaceful! hehehe

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Hahaha you broke the rules?!!! Now, that's more like the writer on this freewrite 💪

We've been breaking the rule of not getting all our gold stars... And I hope today's own is in!

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Who wouldn´t want to enjoy such rest and moment listening to the ocean as it gives a different feeling especially when you are around it. You feel the warmth, the air that accompanies it and the sound of it when everywhere is silent and that can happen in the middle of the night.

It´s Friday and the end of the challenge 💃💃 I got my gold stars last four days and will be getting for today. I hope you have gotten yours too?

Momma, I have tried watching your video but it kept saying "video can´t be played, error occurred" I thought it was my phone but same thing on my laptop. I wanted to reach out to you yesterday but I was so occupied with stuff that I forgot 🤦‍♀️

Aha! This is a new side of you :) And you did create a fascinating story in such a short time! I even imagined you tiptoeing as you got away from your bed onto where Poseidon was where you got to enjoy a blissful night. I !LUV it

And you are getting to your 5th star, yes? I believe so :) Enjoy the journey hehe!

Hey hey hey beautiful host! We are on the last day of DreemPort Challenge, can you believe it? 😱

It's been an amazing ride, alongside all other dreemers. It's heartwarming to see how much support we can get from each other, connections that were made and so much more! Thank you so much for all that you did, for being the most wonderful host and encourager 🙏 You are a blessing and asset to Hive 😍

Much !LUV and go #TeemTengo!!

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