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That, "Then outta nowhere," wasn't enough foreshadowing? Ha! Must work harder next time.

Only near the end, it was a great build up.

Was expecting something else to happen in the van. It was a good plot twist, though my vivid imagination showed me way to much detail.

Then I remembered the advice and relaxed.

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It's sound advice though! Something to never forget, and I think I found a neat little way to help people remember.