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RE: Tyranny of the Status Quo

in #moreequalanimals3 years ago (edited)

I want to thank the Voice and Steem community for helping me build out the ideas in the book.

Steem has a community?

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BTW, there are a few typos in your book excerpt, all involving possessive apostrophes:

If the people elect Christ, should Lucifers lackeys do the best to undermine him?

Lucifers should be Lucifer’s.

Ron Paul and Bernie Sanders both had tremendous initial success by using the parties internal processes in an attempt to gain the party nomination.

parties’ rather than parties

By picking a tribe the voter is no longer able to fully represent the countries interest, instead he is at least partially aligning with one tribe against another.

country’s rather than countries

Also, within the eight bullet points at the end, “Democratic Party Governance Structures” should probably not have capitalizations since you’re not speaking of the Democratic Party specifically, but rather of democratic governance structures within parties.