Hey! Another amazing post! I just posted a story myself. I’d love your opinion of my first chapter! Hope you like it!
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Hey! Another amazing post! I just posted a story myself. I’d love your opinion of my first chapter! Hope you like it!
You need to edit your work a little...
Should be:
Gather all the city's little geniuses
Because you mean the geniuses (plural) belonging to the city (therefore, possessive apostrophe)
Also, I can't help but notice your Rep of 5 - if you spam your blog all over the place, you'll get flagged which will drop your rep.
I can only assume you're a little impatient to move up on Steemit but you can't, you have to build slowly. Build a solid following and follow your peers. That way, you'll all grow together and soon, your little group will be more substantial and will start getting people spam your walls.