Nice writing!
The dream seems so real, it feels like the prologue to a series. What if the gateways are real, and they're calling to him from his sleep? Or maybe the person he saw actually got trapped somewhere and needs his help. Well, guess we'll never know!
Nice writing, once again. I absolutely love your style!
Thanks. Honestly I hadn't considered continuing it
That one scene has just been dancing around my head for a but. I really your follow through ideas. If I ever write more, I'll be sure to mention you so that you can read them.