SAD
(INSPIRED BY MASS SHOOTING DEBATE)
I don't understand killing become your rational choice
I can't comprehend any human can do such things
What is wrong? who is wrong? how wrong it is?
Who reign in your mind?
What you fill your hearth with?
How you nurture your soul?
Still, I can't find answer.
People start blaming each other
Keep talking, sharing, and do nothing.
You accused gun is evil things to have
You accused drugs
You also accused alcohols too
It's easy to blame on something
It's easy to blame on someone
It's easy to blame on everything
Let's us face it bravely
Let's observe thoroughly
Let's make effort to overcome this fully
But first,
We must admit that we had real problem,
We need to cast out blind judgment
We need to listen and talk nicely with one another
Than,
We're opened to so many possibilities
Solution is within our reach
Steps are ready to carry on
This is our fight
This is our cause
This our legacy to next generation
Together we can try
Together we must try
Together we will succed
-end-
Jakarta, February 26th, 2018
@bagindooo
This poem become possible through contribution and inspiration by @dwinblood
Usahakan bilingual bang hahaha kalau bahasa paman sam ini ngak begitu gimana gitu... Peace
peace! susah bang, idenya dari sono sih!
Go go and go,,,
Thank you brother..
Mantap bang. Hahahahha. Ikutan kontes aja bang. Seperti kemarin. Lebih cepat dapat.
follow your hearth ajalah... buat seneng seneng doang disini..makasih udah mampir y....i meant it!
What a deep words you have here..
Yes indeed we have a serious problem in this world, but people shouldn't neglect another feelings and caring more than we do now..
can't agree more @noasalfha. thanks for putting your though in my post!
Nice story @bagindooo
Thanks for stopping by.
thanks brother...
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