Welcome to the 50-word short story challenge. In this weekly challenge, the participants ("Fifty Worders") use the prompt of the week to write a short story in just 50 words. This post provides a weekly feature about writing micro-fiction, a review of last week's 50-word stories, some highlights of the week, and a new prompt for the coming week.
(Image credit: Original image by rawpixel, Pixabay)
Announcement: 100-word short story contest
Perhaps you've been writing 50-word short stories for months, and feel ready for a new challenge. Or perhaps you have never been able to figure out how to squeeze a story into a mere 50 words. Regardless, if you enjoy micro-fiction, you should check out the 100-word Micro-fiction Contest I recently launched with The Writers' Block.
The contest runs until 11:59 Eastern, this coming Saturday, September 1st. (And unlike my very loose 50-word challenge deadline, this one is an actual hard deadline!) I look forward to seeing some participation from the Fifty Worders!
Micro-fiction writing workshop
Writing micro-fiction can be fun and agonizing. Attempting to deliver an entire story within a tight word limit takes some practice, and the results can be mixed. Sometimes you might write a great story with just a few rounds of edits. The next week, you might struggle to get your meaning across, or get the impact you want. Let's talk about the mechanics of this process.
How do you write a 50-word story?
Here are some basic steps. I'll use my most recent story for illustration.
Last week's prompt was "deed." And I will say I could have chosen better, where prompts are concerned. There were mutterings in the various writing group channels amongst stumped participants. (Sorry guys! This week's is better!)
Here are some steps to follow:
- Study the prompt, and think about its meanings. For example, this week I thought about the prompt word, "deed," which could mean a good deed, an action of some kind, a crime, or some property ownership paperwork. An action seemed most interesting — someone taking some extreme measure that would have a huge effect on the life of another person. I came up with the idea of a woman abandoning a child under devastating circumstances.
Source: Pixabay image, by esudroff - The next step is to draft the story. Put the words down on the page. This is the hardest part, sometimes, but once you have words written down, you have something to work with.
- Edit the story to get it just right. Swap out words that don't work well, or that don't feel meaningful, and swap in better, stronger words.
- Make sure that it came to 50 words exactly.
- Find an image that represents what you want to convey. (Note: An alternative method is to start with an image that represents the prompt word. That also works well.)
- If you are so inclined, add some information or "backstory" about the thinking process that went into writing your story. A number of Fifty Worders are doing this now, and it's a really nice addition to these stories! It can be especially helpful when you have something more to say about the topic, or you want to fill in the blanks for your readers. (In my case, for "Ding dong ditch," I wrote about some statistics around people abandoning babies, and Safe Haven laws.)
Last week's story collection
I’d like to welcome our newest contributor, @steemitdiversify. Thanks for joining the Fifty Worders!Here is the complete list of stories inspired by last week's “deed” prompt:
- Karma by @ablaze
- Final Deed, by @alheath
- Book of Remembrance, Page 6, by @botefarm
- The Perfect Birthday Gift, by @purpledaisy57
- Father, by @deirdyweirdy
- The Quick and the Deed, by @negativer
- Deed Not, by @pyemoney
- Standing Ovation: A play in three acts, by @henry-gant
- The Gift Giving, by @steemitdiversify
- Engravings on these nano-blades, by @theironfelix
- Good deeds do not remain unpunished, by @roxy-cat
- A life for an eye, by @hlezama
- It remains for eternity, by @felixgarciap
- Ding dong ditch, by @jayna
Highlights of the week
Each week I highlight a few intriguing stories from the previous week's collection that I hope will inspire current and new Fifty Worders.Standing Ovation: A play in three acts, by @henry-gant
If you asked me before reading this story if it was possible to write a three-act play in 50 words, I would have said unequivocally "no." I stand corrected!Act one: “You will not write a three-act play using only 50 words,” says Janet.Act two:
Center stage.
“I bet you a dollar a word I can,” says Henry at his typewriter.Act three:
We see Janet giving Henry fifty dollars.The curtain closes as the deed is done.
The Quick and the Deed, by @negativer
I could not resist highlighting this story because it is humorous in a rather bizarre way. Negativer's take on the prompt is priceless.Bill laughed. Being sheriff was easy. He counted the money, then slipped the envelope inside his uniform shirt, looking the other way.A gunshot. His view changed to a close-up of the street. Footsteps. Someone reached inside his shirt, taking the envelope.
“Ya’ll don’ need dis. Ya’ll be deed soon.”
The Perfect Birthday Gift, by @purpledaisy57
In this story, the author shares a heartwarming story about a son "giving back." (@purpledaisy57, I hope you don't mind. I made one edit to the tense of the second sentence.)It’s his Mom’s birthday. He has the best gift he could give her. He knows it will make her happy. Something she had been longing for in a long time. He saved enough to give her back the deed to their house and land. His promise to his dad fulfilled.
Good deeds do not remain unpunished, by @roxy-cat
This story shows us how different views can be about giving. Be sure to read her backstory in the actual post."Why do you keep feeding these filthy beggars? Can't you see they are always at our door?" he shouted angrily. Wiping a tear, she whispered: "My momma always told me that good deeds will bring happiness." "Then take them to your precious momma!" And he left, slamming the kitchen door.
Nice work, everyone!
This week's 50-word story prompt
The prompt for this week is “money.” I look forward to reading your stories, Fifty Worders!
Guidelines
Please review carefully. Images must follow the Proper use of images guidelines below.
- Write a story in 50 words. (It's especially cool if you can hit 50 words exactly!)
- Use the #fiftywords tag, and **post the link in the comments of this post**.
- Be sure to read and upvote the work of the other participants. It's all about community!
- Use only artwork that you have the right to use, and attribute it properly. See the following guidelines.
Proper use of images
Proper use of images means one of the following:- The image is public domain, or under creative commons licensing rules.
- It is your own image.
- If it is not one of the above, you must have actual permission.
I have two resources for you, from my friends at @thewritersblock:
And speaking of @thewritersblock, it's a great place to hang out and rub elbows with other writers. Check them out on Discord.
Deadline for this week: Saturday, September 1st. (With a grace period until the new prompt is published.)
The 50-word story clan
I'm mentioning you here if have participated in the #fiftywords short story challenge in the past. Please let me know if you would like your tag removed in this or future posts. (Note that I do trim the list. Those who have not participated for a long time or are not active on Steemit will eventually drop from the mentions.)
@ablaze, @adigitalife, @aggroed, @agmoore, @ahmadmanga, @akdx, @aksounder, @alexandered, @alheath, @anikekirsten, @anixio, @anonymummy
@bagpuss, @beginningtoend, @bex-dk, @blueteddy, @botefarm @brandonsadventur, @brectar, @bryarose23
@caleblailmusik, @carn, @celsius100, @cheekah, @cizzo, @clacrax, @creatr
@damianjayclay, @dbzfan4awhile, @deirdyweirdy, @desmoniac, @diebitch, @dirge, @divineinyang, @donnest, @drahries
@eaglespirit, @elbrujo, @elementm, @emwalker, @enjar, @eroticabian, @esttyb, @evgsk
@fairyhedgehogg, @feebie, @felixgarciap, @felt.buzz, @ficciones, @foxfiction, @foxyspirit, @fromage
@gaming-stuff, @girlbeforemirror, @gmatthe2
@haisa, @happyhairdays, @henry-gant, @hlezama
@jadams2k18, @janine-ariane, @jakeybrown, @jasminearch, @jayna, @jluvs2fly, @jonknight, @josecarrasquero, @joyyrush
@kaelci, @kally, @khadija14, @kimberlylane, @kingspiration, @ktfabler
@ldacey-laforge, @lightoj, @liverussian, @lucylin, @luiskrupaz
@Mammasitta, @marie-jay, @mark-dahl, @mgaft1, @mineopoly, @miniature-tiger, @mizdais, @momzillanc, @mydivathings
@navaneeth, @negativer, @niallon11
@paintingangels, @papacrusher, @phillyc, @pixiehunter, @pizzachain, @poeticnest, @preparedwombat, @prydefoltz, @puppetmaster1111, @purpledaisy57, @pyrowngs
@ravencorinn, @riottales, @rodrigocabrera, @roxy-cat, @rvag5
@sharoonyasir, @sidequest, @spalatino, @stbrians, @steemgiant, @steemitdiversify, @sue-stevenson, @sukhasanasister
@tanglebranch, @thatlovechild, @theironfelix, @therosepatch, @thinknzombie, @tiatu, @tinkerrose, @tuwore, @tygertyger
@wa2qr, @yimiipsa, @yoganarchista, @zen-art
Thanks so much for reading! I hope you try the 50-word challenge. It's so fun to see what can unfold in a mere 50 words!
Posted from my blog with SteemPress : https://jaynalocke.com/2018/08/27/new-50-word-short-story-challenge-and-announcement/
That was a fast week!!! Here we go again with #fiftywords. Great prompt this week, looking forward to reading all the stories..
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@ablaze/beneath-the-oak-a-fifty-words-story
This is my first entry and thank you to @vdux for his post leading me here.
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@four20/money-can-buy-you-love-50-word-short-story-challenge-by-four20
thanks and I look forward to future word challenges
Thanks for joining 50-words!
Here be mine: https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@therosepatch/atoyforheavena50wordshort-kkmaoribbv
Oh, that is too good!
Would never have thought that, too! Gave me a bright smile!
Indeed, fifty dollars worth.
First time ever I participated just the other day in a contest with 500 words. And had the realization I always somehow end up with:
total freedom gives you no borders and limits your discipline.
total restriction kills your creativity and lets you feel chained.
Your writers are really doing it here on the blockchain. Never saw a more engaged folk online.
We do have fun! The various communities, including #fiftywords, have devoted followers and participants.
Agreed. I hope we are not coming off that way! I think I can honestly say that we work within a word limit to support creativity, since you must be quite creative and resourceful to write a whole story in 50 words. 😊
No, you are not coming off that way. The 50 words attempt is challenging and indeed "forces" one into considering the essence of a message. I'd say all limitations are a good method for practicing - getting milage so to speak - in order to deliver a later work which is longer, more detailed and complex. The mind of a writer is an artists mind and when writing fiction one has to be skilled as all other artists. No practice, no success.
I already noticed some progress from my beginning here with blogging and where I stand now. Not so much with writing fiction (in which I am far from being good) but also in thinking.
Yes, "resourceful" puts it really well :-)
Thanks for the additional information. I love hearing people’s views on writing methods. Yes, I think you’re right that writing within limits like 50 words is practice for writing longer, more complex works. It’s a great way to hone your skills!
and here is my entry:)
https://steemit.com/challenge/@erh.germany/50-word-short-story-challenge-money
Hi Fifty Worders! Here's my own contribution: https://steemit.com/challenge/@jayna/oneforthemoney-a50-wordshort-cit51c0wby. I decided not to wait until the last minute this time!
Hello, my entry to the contest sponsored by @jayna. Successes to all!
https://steemit.com/challenge/@aresbon/the-money-tree
Welcome to #fiftywords!
Hullo! :) Here is my entry for this week! ~ https://steempeak.com/fiftywords/@kaelci/free-entry-fiftywords
Can't open the Steempeak link from my phone for some reason... Pity, as I like reading your stories..
Oh no! :( I hope they integrate phone support soon... I am loving Steempeak SO much! - Here is a steemit link! :D https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@kaelci/free-entry-fiftywords
Ah shoot, just catching up on comments now and just seeing this now.. Sorry for delayed response... very sad story, the poor lil kid eh..
Welcome back!
Here is my entry!
Hi @jayna! This is my entry: https://steemit.com/challenge/@aleli/50-wordstoryquery-l2pxlxgx3u
I hope you enjoy it
My entry to the contest here proposed by @jayna
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@marciabon/the-murder-of-hamilton
Welcome to the 50-word challenge!
This is my entry to the contest
https://steemit.com/challenge/@yeceniacarolina/50-word-short-story-challenge-money
Thank you for joining the 50-word challenge!
My entry.
Here’s mine:
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@preparedwombat/the-art-of-the-deal
Hello @jayna, This is my story remembering when we used coins as money, LOL
https://steemit.com/esteem/@felixgarciap/please-try-later-9ec4ac58d9ae6est
Oh dear will really have to think about this one heheh. Thanks for the feature and np for the edit. I might have a story later lol
My entry :https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@purpledaisy57/fifty-words-prompt-unexpected-blessings
Thank you for this challenge. This is my first time participating. I enjoyed the challenge. Here is my story.
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@emergehealthier/a-penny-for-your-thoughts--50-word-short-story-challenge2qhv6nfx
Thank you my entry: https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@steemitdiversify/another-fifty-words-challenge-it-can-change-your-mood
Greetings 50-worders. Here's my contribution for this week.
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@hlezama/better-than-money-a-5o-word-story-for-jayna
This is too cool . . . writing should be play. A job, yes it can be; but, I see it as play.
Thank you for supporting the Arts.
H. G.
Here be me submission: A greenback foundation for this contest.
Herewith:
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@vdux/cash-only-50-word-challenge
By the way--horsax!
This was a challenge :) My first time entering into your contest @jayna ... #fiftywords
My story is about something I always wanted to do as a child with money .... hope you like it.
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@anutu/the-blue-balcony-a-50-word-short-story-about-money
Welcome to the 50-word challenge! I'm so glad you've joined us.
Thank you so much @jayna, I am so happy you had the fabulous idea to create the 50 word challenge. Thank you so much again!
Hi, Jayna,
Here's my entry for this round:
😄😇😄
Here is my first attempt at this challenge! Hope you enjoy. I can't wait to read some of the other stories.
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@foragingquietude/spare-change-50-word-short-story-challenge
Welcome to the wonderful world of 50-word stories!
My link to my story:
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@pyemoney/look-who-s-loved