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RE: New Contest from @Xpilar 20/11-2017 "get free upvote"

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Tonight the atmosphere was very quiet and gripping, knowing I live in the countryside. Not far from my house, there is a house no longer inhabitants. The house has long been abandoned by the owner. And now the house is dormant and a haunted place. The house feels haunted when dusk starts to come and somehow this night feels so cold it pierces my skin.

One day when my friend and I passed by the empty house, the clock showed about 11 pm. Feeling the wind blowing hard through my ears, as if someone called me. And I heard the moan of the man who asked for help, out of nowhere where the voice came from. Day was getting night, the atmosphere grew tense and the wind that blew felt very cold.

The next day.
Night arrived, the sun began to break. With a very curious flavor. We want to see the atmosphere inside the empty house. And only with flashlight, with curiosity. We immediately set foot to enter the house, the atmosphere in the house was very dark and the sound of a creepy sound even made the house even more haunted. And I saw a broken photo album in the desk drawer. And there is also a notebook containing the problems that exist in the family.

Like someone was following me from behind, when I looked back there was no one. Then my friend wanted to take me out of the house. Suddenly there was a very creepy voice "What do you want to come to my house !!!". Instantly, we ran by screaming for help. No one listened to us, we were terrified.

Finally there was one person who helped us when we got stuck in that house. "Do not you go into that house .... The house is very dangerous. A lot of strange things happened inside the house. You better go home ". And finally we went home in a state of trembling fear.

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Scary story, good @coinfarmer

Thank you @xpilar. Hope you like it

you are amazing!

very good s

Good job.

thanks for sharing :)