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RE: 50 Word Micro-Fiction Competition – Win SBI Shares

in #contest6 years ago

Greetings, everyone. Great stories so far. I hope to be able to comment them all (counted mins on line).
My entry:
The Shapeshifter
One night, he shows up as a hen. Too big for a bird. The kids are eating and say, Ma', come see this.
I look, hush them.
Don't chase it.
Kids look at each other petrified.
It vanishes.
How did it out?
No door or window opened.
Nothing!

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Thanks for your entry. Good call on not chasing a shape shifter! E x

Thanks for your entry.
Good call on not chasing a
Shape shifter! E x

                 - eveningart


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Haha. Yep. Never a good idea.
I'll post shortly a more developed story that will provide more background to these characters. It will be for @marlyncabrera's contest (in Spanish), but I'm working on a translation already. Hopefully, it will help understand the scene. I have played with some flashes in the life of the narrator from a different view point for @jayna's 50-word stories challenge.
This is a new thing for me. I had never tried creative writing. Let's say i am trying 50 words at a time

Ooh how exciting- good luck with the translation. And if you ask me, all creative writing is 50 words at a time... or even 1 word at a time. Have fun with it. E x

Haha. Yep. Never a good idea.
I'll post shortly a more developed story that will provide more background to these characters. It will be for @marlyncabrera's contest (in Spanish), but I'm working on a translation already. Hopefully, it will help understand the scene. I have played with some flashes in the life of the narrator from a different view point for @jayna's 50-word stories challenge.
This is a new thing for me. I had never tried creative writing. Let's say i am trying 50 words at a time