It is more the content of the plot I am not so keen on, I feel like she should have had more back bone earlier on, more of a woman of resolve, the bit about her and her match seemed a bit too much, and I wanted to rework it more to be that he was more of a background element. I would have ended up with a totally different story though, and writing this one could turn out to be valuable experience ;)
nods but it is what happens to people who are in domestic abuse situations. Many get into this rut of believing what they are told they are ...it was sadly very realistic ...
It is more the content of the plot I am not so keen on, I feel like she should have had more back bone earlier on, more of a woman of resolve, the bit about her and her match seemed a bit too much, and I wanted to rework it more to be that he was more of a background element. I would have ended up with a totally different story though, and writing this one could turn out to be valuable experience ;)
nods but it is what happens to people who are in domestic abuse situations. Many get into this rut of believing what they are told they are ...it was sadly very realistic ...