Hey there mate. I am here to provide feedback to your post using by rating them
Title: 8/10 - Good can still be improve by making it short or precise
Body/Content: 9/10 - I like how everything was laid out so well, some words can be simplified or shorten.
Fluent/Topic Knowhow: 7/10 - I can feel that you have been searching for the content hard and that shows.
X Factor: 7/10 - Pretty good a lot of X factor really comes down on the way you write your piece.
Overall Post Vote - 8/10 Nice content for people to know more about what interest you and great work on the article/art
I have voted and although it is small I hope you appreciate the comments and feedback.
Thanks and goodluck.