The premise is intriguing, but the readability is harmed somewhat by enormous paragraphs. Breaking them up into smaller ones would result in a smoother, more approachable read.
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The premise is intriguing, but the readability is harmed somewhat by enormous paragraphs. Breaking them up into smaller ones would result in a smoother, more approachable read.
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Ain't no thing but a chicken wing, my computer duder. It's nice to see more scifi writers on here. I've got an ongoing serial scifi novel, "Little Robot" going on my blog right now that you might enjoy.
It's like The Walking Dead but with domestic robots infected with a computer virus rather than zombies. The main characters must find refuge from these mindless but merciless killers, which can only be stopped by shooting them in the battery.
There is also a love story which unfolds amid this apocalypse between a human and a gynoid, which is condemned by other survivors who have become violently intolerant of robots (and anybody who would love one).
Zombi robots is a cool concept ☺ I never thought that way.
hlw man you have good knowledge but you can make scifi novel little robot by adding some powers in it by this your novel get more publishcity
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True, I personally skipped several paragraph because the short story didn't seem short.