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RE: Sci-Fi Novel: The Ultimate Debate - Part 1: Childhood Of Great Master Sun Moi

in #fiction6 years ago

A little genius, this Sun Moi :)
You should correct this:
Even after reaching puberty, he did not talk to any girl except in a forced state.
And also, I don't know that expression: "that sometimes that his jaw was locked" ... maybe you paraphrased a Turkish expression?

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