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RE: Day 133: 5 Minute Freewrite: Thursday - Prompt: the attic

in #freewrite7 years ago

This is such a beautiful and poignant story. You did a great job of setting seeing and leading us to the final mood. I felt sadness and longing in this well-written piece.

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That means so much to me, thank you! I am glad you got the feelings as well as the sight and touch, that was my goal!

hugs! you did fabulous, dear.

Thanks darling! hugs