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    Β 6 years agoΒ Β 

    I really like your entry. But doesn't the last line have 6 syllables instead of 5? I apologize if I'm in error - new to this and trying to make sure I understand.

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    Β 6 years agoΒ (edited)Β 

    you're right.

    It's six syllables. I didn't notice until now

    Thanks for pointing that out

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      Β 6 years agoΒ Β 

      Congratulations on winning! It is a beautiful haiku!

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