Hive Open Mic Week 132 | Woman, Don't Go/Mujer, No Te Vayas | An Original Song by DrStrings | [ENG/E

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Hey Musicians 🤩❤️

What's up guys? How are you all doing? I hope you guys are doing cool even in these tough times. Praise God 🙌🏾.

So, I haven't really been up here for about three days or so, but I'm back. What better way to get back up than to post another music video 🙂. This is my entry for @hiveopenmic contest week 132. The prompt is Women Life Freedom. I'd be playing an original song today. I actually wrote it today too, that's why I'm posting quite late (because I'm not good at memorizing lyrics quickly, lol).

Anyway, the name of this song is Woman, Don't Go.

Inspired by the prompt, the lyrics tell a story of a poor single mother who was basically abused by her husband who left her and her little child alone. The chorus of the song seeks to encourage the mother who keeps trying all her best to raise her child alone, and at the same time, trying to keep her own soul away from death because of anxiety and depression, hence the title of the song Woman, Don't Go, asking her not to go to sleep yet.

I do hope you guys enjoy this one. Hey, what do you know? I think I'm getting better at singing 😅. Or is that just me 😑? Here are the lyrics to the song:

Lyrics

Verse:

Her wounds are left to count
Wanting to be free
Always had her doubts
Yet how strong she is
She'll never speak a word
Crying in the dark
Searching for her voice
They've removed her spark
Oh her little child
Looks upon her face
With no hope in sight
Yet she runs this race
Knowing fully well
That she might never win
Yet how strong she is

Pre-chorus:

If only she'd been
Treated like a queen

Chorus:

Woman, don't think about it
It won't last too long
So if you think it's over
Know your child needs more
And when death's at your door
Woman, don't go

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Hola músicos 🤩❤️

¿Qué pasa chicos? ¿Como están? Espero que estén bien, incluso en estos tiempos difíciles. Alabado sea Dios 🙌🏾.

Realmente no he estado aquí durante unos tres días, pero he vuelto. Qué mejor manera de volver a levantarse que publicar otro video musical 🙂. Esta es mi entrada para el concurso @hiveopenmic semana 132. El mensaje es Mujeres, vida, libertad. Estaría tocando una canción original hoy. De hecho, también lo escribí hoy, es por eso que estoy publicando bastante tarde (porque no soy bueno memorizando letras rápidamente, jajaja).

De todos modos, el nombre de esta canción es Woman, Don't Go.

Inspirada en el mensaje, la letra cuenta la historia de una madre soltera pobre que básicamente fue abusada por su esposo, quien la dejó a ella y a su pequeño hijo solos. El estribillo de la canción busca alentar a la madre que sigue haciendo todo lo posible por criar sola a su hijo, y al mismo tiempo, tratando de mantener su propia alma alejada de la muerte a causa de la ansiedad y la depresión, de ahí el título de la canción* Mujer, no te vayas,* pidiéndole que no se duerma todavía.

Espero que disfruten de este. ¿Qué es lo que sabes? Creo que estoy mejorando en el canto 😅. ¿O solo soy yo 😑? Aquí está la letra de la canción:

Letra

Verso:

Sus heridas quedan para contar
queriendo ser libre
Siempre tuvo sus dudas
Sin embargo, qué fuerte es ella
Ella nunca dirá una palabra
Llorando en la oscuridad
Buscando su voz
Le quitaron la chispa
Ay su hijito
La mira a la cara
Sin esperanza a la vista
Sin embargo, ella corre esta carrera
Sabiendo perfectamente bien
Que tal vez ella nunca gane
Sin embargo, qué fuerte es ella

Pre coro:

Si tan solo hubiera estado
Tratada como una reina

Coro:

Mujer, no lo pienses
No durará mucho
Así que si crees que se acabó
Sepa que su hijo necesita más
Y cuando la muerte llama a tu puerta
Mujer, no te vayas

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Hello friend, how are you? hey I like your user name; nice to meet you, I had not heard you before and you really surprised me with such a beautiful song, I congratulate you, I loved the lyrics and the inspiration!!!

You play guitar, plus the keyboard, and if that's not enough, you also sing, you are very cool friend, what a pleasure to have you with us!!!!!

Friend remember that beyond responding to the comments on your videos, you should also visit the other artists weekly and support them, that way we all grow together in this big family!!!

Thank you very much for joining us in this edition of the Hive Open Mic, we hope to see you next week! ¡Blessings! ¡You Rock! 🙌😀💛

Thanks so much for enjoying the video, and for having me along with the family here ❤️✨😊. I'd love to engage with a lot of other musicians.

Amigo @drstrings, qué hermosa canción. Me gustó mucho tanto la letra como la melodía. Admiro mucho a los compositores, interpretar una canción original tiene mucho valor. Además, tienes una hermosa voz, es muy grato escucharte, y tocaste muy bien tanto la guitarra como el teclado. Felicitaciones. Me gustó mucho tu post. Mil bendiciones y éxito en el evento.

Dear frien @drstrings what a beautiful song. I really liked both the lyrics and the melody. I admire composers a lot, interpreting an original song has a lot of value. In addition, you have a beautiful voice, it is very pleasant to listen to you, and you played very well both the guitar and the keyboard. Congratulations. I really liked your post. A thousand blessings and success in the event.

Thank you so much. I'm really flattered that you loved the song (and my voice 😅). Much appreciated ❤️🤩✨

Felicidades @drstrings, hermosa canción muy bien interpretada por ti amigo. Saludos y bendiciones para ti 🙏😜

Muchas gracias querido amigo. Me alegra mucho que te haya gustado 😁✨

This is a beautiful piece❤, an amazing performance

Why thank you my dear friend❤️✨

You are multitalented
This is beautiful brother
You're good at singing,playing piano and playing the guitar
Nice listening to you

Jeez, thanks man... Still working on the singing part though 😅. Much appreciated ❤️✨

You really sing well 😀 it was peaceful and soothing too

I'm flattered. Thanks so much dear friend 🤩✨

Interesting arrangement you have here, brother. You play the guitar and the keyboard too... that's so cool.

I am particularly in love with the lyrics of the song. It's even more interesting to know that they are yours.

You make good music bro. Keep it up!

Ayy, thanks so much brother. I'm working hard on improving my music skills, so I'm now into songwriting. I'm really glad you liked it ❤️✨🙌🏾

Wow, your songwriting skill is top notch, I won't be surprised to hear or see that you are a producer too, you have good hands on the guitar and the keyboard too.💝

Well I am a producer too although it's been a while now since I did that😁. Thanks so much for the compliments bro 🤩✨

I knew that you'd be a producer, it's so beautiful finding you on hive bro I seriously hope to see more of you and your beautiful works

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Primera vez que te visito amigo @drstrings y fue muy grato escuchar tu presentación observo que eres un gran talentoso artista tocas diferentes instrumentos, tu voz es hermosa y afinada y de paso eres compositor 👏👏👏👏🤗🎶🎶🎶⭐. Felicitaciones y éxitos🎵🎵🧕🥰👍💫🎸🎤🎼🎹💯💢🌟💛💚💜❤️🧡💙💞