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I'd love to see your healthier version, have a look at my response to Lena;)
I tried editing this to include a note about that but posted through the beta site and it's not allowing me to edit, have to find out why as I often edit my posts!
Error message pops up - The permlink of a comment cannot be changed.

Would you be able to edit from Steempeak or Steemit.com?

Thanks Fiona, I was editing this from busy.org but went back to the beta site where I originally posted from and managed to edit successfully!