Love In Magic City || Amor en la ciudad mágica - Writing Club Contest

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I can never find true love, not in this life, maybe in another life... Olivia thought in her heart.

She had never been lucky with love. Her first love left a mark in her heart after their breakup and she felt she was never going to love again until she found Ronald. A month later, he turned out to be another frog and not her Prince charming.

Even though Olivia was the busy office girl, she always turned up for her childhood friend, Fred who was also very unlucky with love. They would chat at length on how badly love has dealt with them. They had never felt they were a match to love each other romantically so it never got to them to take their friendship farther and those two had more quarrels than happy times as friends.

Olivia and Fred kept living a love - hate relationship as childhood friends, trying to be there for each other and helping each other get over one's hurt... Until they both woke in a huge different city. There was a big bill board that revealed where they were immediately "Magic City".

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Where could this be? Olivia tried to speak but she realized that Fred could not hear her even though he was close. At the same time, Fred asked a question and realized that Olivia was deaf to his words. They both stood for some minutes in awe and a little disappointed.

They decided to walk around and find a way out of the so called magic city. The place was so beautiful, the streets walkways were made of love shaped diamonds and every tree had beautiful leaves of love letters... They felt waves of love from every breeze and it made their walk lonely as they thought they needed someone who loves them to enjoy the feeling they were having.

It hardly dawned on them that they were together and could find a way to love each other because they had accepted their relationship to be just a simple childhood love and hate relationship.

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They both got to a huge castle in the city, it had huge frames of them on the walls and before they could get surprised by that, they saw themselves walk out of a room together laughing happily with each other as they were about to eat dinner.

How is this even possible? I am her husband in this huge castle? Fred said within him and he got a reply almost immediately... You're in magic city, everything is possible here.

Olivia was dumbfounded because she found it hard to believe what she was seeing that she couldn't even ask questions.

As the two were about leaving the castle, their look alike said to themselves.

I remember when we were both so arrogant to the fact that we could be happy with each other but we focused on getting hurt over and over again by others who never loved us a bit close to the way we love each other now.

They both turned to each other trying to grasp the situation at hand... Are we being shown our future? Olivia thought and a voice came in which the two were able to hear.

You both craved for love, you slept with hurt from another failed love and we thought we could help you see what you two can be if you will accept those lingering feelings you both have for each other.

Those two in the huge castle are what you two will become if you would accept your feelings and love each other more by focusing on yourselves... The voice said.

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Olivia and Fred looked at each other and decided to confess their feelings to each other, they thought they were doing a great job in keeping it a secret but magic found out and revealed it. They tried to say the word "I love you" almost together and they heard themselves.

The magic city vanished and they were both in a beautiful garden hugging and feeling happy about themselves, they promised to love each other till the end.

Thanks for reading!!!

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Amor En La Ciudad Mágica

Nunca podré encontrar el amor verdadero, no en esta vida, tal vez en otra vida... Olivia pensó en su corazón.

Nunca había tenido suerte con el amor. Su primer amor dejó una huella en su corazón después de su ruptura y sintió que nunca más volvería a amar hasta que encontró a Ronald. Un mes después, resultó ser otra rana y no su príncipe azul.

A pesar de que Olivia era la chica de oficina ocupada, siempre buscaba a su amigo de la infancia, Fred, quien también tuvo muy mala suerte con el amor. Charlarían largo y tendido sobre lo mal que los ha tratado el amor. Nunca habían sentido que fueran compatibles para amarse románticamente, por lo que nunca se les ocurrió llevar su amistad más lejos y esos dos tuvieron más peleas que momentos felices como amigos.

Olivia y Fred siguieron viviendo una relación de amor y odio como amigos de la infancia, tratando de estar ahí el uno para el otro y ayudándose el uno al otro a superar sus heridas... Hasta que ambos despertaron en una ciudad muy diferente. Había un gran cartel que revelaba dónde estaban inmediatamente "Ciudad Mágica".

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¿Dónde podría ser esto? Olivia trató de hablar pero se dio cuenta de que Fred no podía escucharla a pesar de que estaba cerca. Al mismo tiempo, Fred hizo una pregunta y se dio cuenta de que Olivia estaba sorda a sus palabras. Ambos se quedaron unos minutos asombrados y un poco desilusionados.

Decidieron caminar y encontrar una salida de la llamada ciudad mágica. El lugar era tan hermoso, los pasillos de las calles estaban hechos de diamantes en forma de amor y cada árbol tenía hermosas hojas de cartas de amor... Sintieron olas de amor de cada brisa y eso hizo que su caminar fuera solitario porque pensaron que necesitaban a alguien que los amara. para disfrutar de la sensación que estaban teniendo.

Apenas se dieron cuenta de que estaban juntos y podían encontrar una manera de amarse porque habían aceptado que su relación era solo una simple relación de amor y odio infantil.

Ambos llegaron a un enorme castillo en la ciudad, tenía enormes marcos de ellos en las paredes y antes de que pudieran sorprenderse por eso, se vieron saliendo juntos de una habitación riéndose felices el uno con el otro cuando estaban a punto de cenar.

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Como es esto posible? ¿Soy su esposo en este enorme castillo? Dijo Fred en su interior y obtuvo una respuesta casi de inmediato... Estás en la ciudad mágica, aquí todo es posible.

Olivia estaba estupefacta porque le costaba creer lo que estaba viendo que ni siquiera podía hacer preguntas.

Cuando los dos estaban a punto de salir del castillo, se dijeron a sí mismos.

Recuerdo cuando ambos éramos tan arrogantes por el hecho de que podíamos ser felices el uno con el otro, pero nos enfocábamos en ser lastimados una y otra vez por otros que nunca nos amaron ni un poco de la forma en que nos amamos ahora.

Ambos se miraron el uno al otro tratando de comprender la situación en cuestión... ¿Se nos muestra nuestro futuro? Olivia pensó y entró una voz que los dos pudieron oír.

Ambos anhelaban el amor, se acostaron con el dolor de otro amor fallido y pensamos que podríamos ayudarlos a ver lo que ustedes dos pueden ser si aceptan esos sentimientos persistentes que ambos tienen el uno por el otro.

Esos dos en el enorme castillo son en lo que ustedes dos se convertirán si aceptan sus sentimientos y se aman más enfocándose en ustedes mismos... Dijo la voz.

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Olivia y Fred se miraron y decidieron confesarse sus sentimientos, pensaron que estaban haciendo un gran trabajo al mantenerlo en secreto, pero la magia lo descubrió y lo reveló. Intentaron decir la palabra "te amo" casi juntos y se escucharon.

La ciudad mágica se desvaneció y ambos se encontraban en un hermoso jardín abrazados y felices consigo mismos, prometieron amarse hasta el final.

¡¡¡Gracias por leer!!!

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Oh, sorry, to be honest, after all the encouragement I dud today, I am sorry, but too tired to read the english Story, wich always is a little challenge for its own for me ;-) the challenge within the challenge ;-) but I am sure you wrote something great and catched you daily Star!
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It's fine @beeber I appreciate your effort, it still counts

oh @beeber this made me laugh #sorrynotsorry don't worry I read both English and Spanish to make up @merit.ahama for beeber 😁

Hahaha great!

Oh thats great dear Ed Nightowl Leeder, so you can tell mit in short words, what the story is about? ;-) !LOL

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Well @beeber did you read it in the end, it is a love story in a magic kingdom and when they come back to reality Olivia and Fred realise they are not enemies or love hate friends but in love with each other.

Yeah that's the story 😊🙌

hehe it was fun, I like reading your stories!

Most times we fail to really acknowledge the one in front of us. We feel they can't be the one and we end up searching for love else where. I'm glad the magic land showed them the truth about the love they have for each other.

Beautifully written..

Hope you are on the verge of getting your star today? Please don't relent and don't stop keeping the fire burning. Make sure you drink lots of water and observe your quiet time.. All the best

Yeah, the magic land did what they were failing to do.

I'm on it, I'll surely get the star 💪 thanks

Good to know you are working towards getting your stars. All the best

Thanks 😊

Do magical indeed....
Most times we travel far in search of what we need whereas it is right there within our environment
A nice read indeed, kudos to your magical writing skill too

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it 😊

The magic cityyyyyyy! Where it came from 🤔. I think they had taken a drug together that made both of them truthful 😝.

Hi, @merit.ahama how is your progress going on? We will rock. Don't forget to submit your report to the Leeder . Keep hydrated and NO JUNK FOOD 😜

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😂😂 It's so hard looking away from junk foods, but I'm trying though 😊

Keep trying sweetie. We are just reaching the finish line. Yaaaay

Wow. This reminds me alot of that movie "isn't it romantic?" Lol. But this is so true. We always look far and miss what's right in front of us.

Merit, you not only have a beautiful smile that lights up the world of others, you have a kind heart too. You're talented and you're bold. You don't back down in the face of a challenge and you're tenacious; tender but firm. It's a new day Dreemer. We're getting that gold star, so Drink water, exercise, get on to achieving those goals, Encourage other Teem Members too. I know you can do it. Nothing stopping you!

Love,

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Wow I feel so motivated, thanks to all the teems... It's been so busy for me but I'll surely get that star 🥰

Go! Go!! Go!!!

Hehehehe

That's the spirit, go Teem Fierce haha. We can do this!!! @merit.ahama @deraaa ...keep hitting big and we will cross the line tomorrow together ❤️!ALIVE !PIZZA

Hehe 😋

Great! 💪

Beautiful love story. At times you just need to open your eyes and see what's in front of you.

How did your day go? Did you do your dreemport tasks.

My day was adventurous, almost done with my tasks 😊

Wow, beautiful story, I guess they needed to come to terms with their feeling indeed to be free.

I loved reading this, I hope you are doing well and you have had your quiet time.

I'm glad you loved reading my story.
Yeah, I've done that... Working really well towards getting today's star 😊
What about you?

I am alright, doing pretty great, thank you.

Cheers 🥂😊

Thank you

This is the real love.
I guess destiny brought them together coupled with the fact that magic was included to veil their differences in who to love

Exactly, magic just made it known to them.
Thanks

When love is true, castles do not matter, opinions that may arise, much less those magical barriers that silence their voices, do not matter.

The answer to this is poured into every word that is written here.

"Be Light."

So true, thanks so much for your comment... I appreciate it 🥂

What a beautiful magical story. Please I'm really dreaming of being in such magical castle where my true love and I will commune and get closer to each other. Lovely writing ma'am.

I hope your dream come true dear, thanks

Ohh thank God for magic city those two would have probably still be adamant over one another.
Nice one you got there.
How has Monday been so far?
Hope you still on track for the challenge.
You can do this you know champ.
Let get to it. Gold star for the week

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The magic city brought them together. I love that. It´s so interesting I must say. Hey girl! Did you tick the gold star today? It´s 9:02pm and I guess you are done with all your tasks for today? Do not relent and finish up if you haven´t 😉

Yeah, I'm gonna finish up in few minutes from now... Thanks teammate 😊

Great! Have you seen Tengo´s post? It is up already

Yeah, I've seen it

I loved this and at the start I was a love hate relationship .... hmm I think this will be an Olivia and Fred love story.
A great twist with the magic city.
So this is for a contest and I don't recognise the community either.
I am so late to Hive today that there seems so much to do :)
I have popped our teem tengo banner here if you want to use it
Well done and keep that smile beaming high 😁

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Wow the banner came out so cool, I've downloaded it and I can't wait to start giving the touch of Tengo in every challenger post.

Hope you got your star for today, I really hope you did.

I am as tired as @beeber ... Sincerely. But because I promised to be here and I finally found my way down I had to read through.

It's great the two friends finally accepted their feelings for each other. Now, no one will hurt them in the name of love anymore.

Nice story with the Castle, and magic, and stuff, and I am reading this on behalf of my teem including @beeber 🥰

I hope you completed all your tasks and have reported to your leader? I will be done with mine soon so I can report and have some rest.

See you tomorrow sweetheart. Sweet dreams. 💚💚

Hahaha thanks girl... I'm just getting to read your comment 😩 it's been so busy for me

It's alright too babe. Everyone knows exactly how everyone is feeling... Hehehehe.... We are all in this together 🥺🙈🥰

What is not to love about love! It brings out the best in people 😍

I hope your having and awesome monday and don't forget to do your 35 minute physical activity 💪 You got this!

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hello @merit.ahama

i love the story! and it keeps me hooked until the end. :)

anyway how are you doing with the challenge? hope you are getting all the task done so we can get that star that we are aiming for :) have a good day Merit! and let's get that star today!

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en ocosiones, en una relación amorosa, hay que buscar la ciudad mágica que nos permitan recordar porque estamos con esa persona y cuanto amor hemos retenido, a veces por orgullo, gracias por la magia en tu relato, lo disfruté, saludos.

I hope they find lasting love with each other once they leave the magic city !ALIVE !PIZZA

Yeah they did 😊

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