Indeed, that front part looks a bit odd. It doesn't attract me at all.
I had the time after all, so I may as well try and make it Pulitzer-worthy, right? Wrong, as the more I change, and the more I add onto the original piece of fairly descent spontaneity, I kept making it worse.
It seems that I was lucky in that regard because as soon as I was done with the test... I could go outside and play! Thus, losing any possibility to screw up what I had already done! 🤣
Lol, I only wish that was possible. The schools here can be strict, seeing how every teacher carries a large, nasty cane around... So, even if you're done very early, they'll just ask you to go to sleep, and they'll wake you up five minutes before the exam ends 😂. Hence why I keep making an already decent essay even worse!