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RE: Military married to the Police Force...how many agendas can coincide?

in Proof of Brain3 years ago

Thanks , finally a comment i can work with ,and indeed i wrote it in some sage style poetic form , and yes i should have pointed this out better . Thought calling it raw would do it . The downvotes came from other comment's totally unrelated to it , i made on other places . No anger over not being successful , i am learning , i know nothing , the coin is not my goal . To me it's learning how to communicate true creative expression's . A DV with no feedback , is so frustrating for me ,.. could have put some pictures in to . ;-)

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I had noticed that you called the piece 'raw' fiction,so I wasn't expecting a real polished piece, but I wasn't expecting something so raw that it would be difficult to read. Trying to meet (or manage) people's expectations is always going be difficult.

I had a few early downvotes without explanation that were likewise puzzling, it turned out be someone who was automatically downvoting EVERY upvote from someone else, it had nothing at all to do with my content. Try not to let downvotes get in your head, especially if you're not here to chase the coin. Keep improving your work and putting it out there, eventually your audience will find you.

I've seen a few writing-oriented communities around here, though the only one I can remember right now is The Ink Well. One of them has weekly free-write contests, any of them would probably get you noticed more if you're going to post without pictures. I've been getting some love in the Rant, Complain, Talk community with word-only posts. Not a lot of rewards, but there are many people in that community who will take the time to READ.

I'm guessing that some of the problems I'm seeing in your work are because English is not your first language. If you ever want someone to do some free editing for you, let me know.

Thks for the advice and offer . learned some . :-)

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