An encounter with true love

in Cinnamon Cup Coffee3 years ago (edited)

Greetings, dear coffee connoisseur friends. I am very happy to participate again in the CONTEST - 2nd Anniversary & Valentine's. I take this opportunity to invite @ninaeatshere.

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Act 1
Description of the setting for the scenario

A clear sky and a starry night create a truly spectacular scenery blanket for this walk, meanwhile, Amélie, thinks about her life, along with many things that must happen at the beginning of February.

(poetic monologue 1)

Amélie:

Things come to my mind amid loneliness.
She always accompanies me
She has been a good friend
So much so that she has sat in my life, staying with me
Without having a reason to be able to separate her from here.
She seems to feel very comfortable.

Narrator's voice

As she sits on a park bench on the banks of the river, from afar the silhouette of a character begins to show itself until he approaches her and sits down next to her. It is Gerald, an old friend she has always been in love with.

Gerald:

Hello Amélie.
What a fortune to find you on my path.
Just when I was lost in the middle of this vegetable immensity.
Gerald: Tell me.
What are you doing here all alone?
What has become of your life in all these years?

Amélie:

Hello Gerald, I haven't heard from you for a long time.
I thought you'd left the country like so many other people
or that you forgot me completely

Gerald:

Just keep silent and smile with a shy look, pretending to be sorry.

Amélie:

Life has smiled on me very well in terms of prosperity, a good job, and a nice apartment, but it has limited me in time.

I live immersed in continuous tasks, which have distanced me from social relationships and therefore, from the possibility of finding good love.

How I miss the possibility of having an ideal partner, a friend, someone who is the other half of this orange, with whom I would like to share my world.

Gerald:

I see that I missed a lot in your days
If only I had stayed for some time, who knows?
Maybe, our friendship could have turned into something more.
I would fill that void.

Amélie:

With a mischievous smile, she replies:
Only fate has that answer.

You know Gerald, I don't know why?
But walking along the river bank has always pleased me, since I came to France, my days have been immersed in those beautiful landscapes, and in the architecture of its buildings, there is a reason why they call it the city of light, Paris is bright and very bright.

There is nothing more beautiful and precious than seeing the Eiffel Tower illuminating with its great reflector the corners of this city, showing to all its inhabitants every night a ray of hope if we can say it in any way.

Don't you feel the same?

Gerald:

With a slightly opaque and low tone, he replies:

Yes, you are right, it is an ideal thing to enjoy, but not in solitude.
That's why I ask you not to let opportunities pass you by and enjoy them to the fullest.
Find someone to share a good cup of coffee with to brighten up your life.

Amélie smiles with a seductive look.

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Act 2
Description of the setting for the scene

Amélie admires the sky while listening in the background to the Édith Piaf song she has always loved, life in pink, sung by street musicians in the park.

Narrator's voice

Suddenly, perhaps by chance, perhaps as a reflection of the sky, or as a premonition and a divine sign, she sees in the firmament pass the famous green comet, a natural phenomenon that she vaguely remembered from an internet publication.

Amélie:
(poetic monologue 2)

Oh, Gerald, you can see that ray of hope in the sky
that same energy that unites us
is destiny

It is you with whom I want to share my coffee every morning
how much I've longed to have you by my side again
talking to you is a miracle, it's what I needed
stay with me
let's change our destinies
let's make possible what we never were
but now we will be.

Suddenly everything is transformed before my eyes,
I can understand things I've never seen before,
in the streets, things change,
the people who walk are different
their clothes are no longer of this time
the avenues no longer look like the ones I know
full of modernity

Without a doubt,
the cityscape I'm used to is gone
Gerald, What's going on?
Is it the magic of this green comet?
Love, or the aroma of coffee.

Gerald:

Please be calm
just enjoy the moment
let's drink that cup of coffee together
luckily, the thermos is still keeping it warm
just look into my eyes
see the gleam of joy that being with you brought me.

Amélie:
Why do you say such strange phrases to me?
Is there something wrong with you, and you don't want to tell me?
Come on, Gerald, you've always known that I love you very much.
But I never dared to tell you
I'm sorry I didn't shout my wishes to the four winds
before you left.

Gerald:

That's just it, Amélie,
I've already left
but I needed to say goodbye to you before I came into the light.

Act 3
Dénouement

Gerald:

Goodbye, my love
please don't cling to the past
life and enjoy it.

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Narrator's voice.

Amélie did not say another word.
But she immediately understood that the love of her life was no longer on the earthly plane.
Only the magic of love allowed her to share a few moments over a cup of coffee before disappearing forever.

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Why did it have to end that way?
I was already beginning to get excited for Amélie...finally she had found love, but no!
You denied me that. Very sad!

But maybe it's a good thing she got to share a final cup of coffee and I hope she finds the love she seeks too.

Amazing storyline.
Well-done!

Ha ha ha ha I loved your natural commentary ha ha ha ha I'm glad you enjoyed the whole story.

I hope those wishes of that night come true, it was a very emotional last cup of coffee.

Thank you very much for your nice words.

A piece full of romance and lights, just as love dazzles even when physical bodies go to another plane. How nice of you to insert the green comet into your story.

Hi thanks for your comment, I agree with you that the magic of light can influence many things, that's why I think it was the central plot arc of this romantic story with a sad but understandable ending.

Romantic and absolutely beautiful 🤩
So much wistful nostalgia and exquisite lyrical imagery.
Superbly conceived; a sensory delight!

Hello, thank you very much for your work, I am very excited to achieve the goal of transmitting to the public a different feeling of love, touching sensitive points such as life and death, but highlighting the value of hope. Another thing is the first time I write a script for a play, it was a very good creative challenge. Congratulations to the organizers of this contest for their great ideas.

I like the tone of your story and what could be more romantic than a few scenes of platonic love in Paris with La Vie En Rose playing in the background?

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Hello, thank you very much for your words, you are so right, I love that song, it is pure romance, I think I managed to transmit what I wanted in this, which is my first play, to capture a feeling of love, but in a different way, it was a great challenge. My congratulations to those who came up with this great idea and to all the members of this excellent community.

 2 years ago  

🎉Congratulations @flywithmarlin!

This was a FANTASTIC Entry with ALL the elements that we were looking for.

GREAT WORK 👏

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Thank you very much, I really enjoyed participating in this contest. I especially want to congratulate the creators of the idea of putting the script of the play as a challenge, that pushed me to try harder, as it was something I had never experienced before. I love you all a thousand congratulations.

 2 years ago  

You are very welcome 😍

We will give a special thank you to @leaky20 for his creation of the Valentine's Play prompt. It was an original and unique prompt, and we were amazed to see how everyone elevated their efforts to exceed our expectations.
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 2 years ago  

Nice crown that you've added.
I'm glad that people liked the prompt and gave it a go. 😁

 2 years ago  

I was up till after 1:00 AM, but I could not resist adding that crown when I saw the comment. The prompt was a real hit that people cannot stop raving about, so THANK YOU! YOU ROCK!🙌

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 3 years ago  

Beautiful romantic scenes are set in the City of Love and lights. The names of the character made it believable.
I loved the tone of it.
Thank you so much for participating in this contest. We truly appreciate it:)))

Hi Milli, for me, it is a real pleasure to participate in your initiatives, this time the theme of the play was wonderful and allowed me to test myself and create something that I had never done before. How nice that you liked the names of the characters and the romantic atmosphere, I hope Netflix will also like it and make a movie someday, hehehehe.

 3 years ago  

Hehe! I'm pleased with the recipient of the play.
It was an original concept, and the authors have exceeded our expectations with what they have created!
Thanks for your lovely reply:)))

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 3 years ago  

This is absolutely splendid, I loved the poetry 😍

I'm a sucker for a tough ending too, well done :)!

Thank you very much, your words are great.

Do true love exist? As for this play, possible yes. It was a good read over a hot coffee.

Jajaja hola, interesante conocer esta faceta artística jajajaja te agradezco por la invitación pero yo no soy buena en estas cosas, me encanta leerlas pero prefiero dejárselas a los entendidos, respeto mucho a la literatura y me daría pánico hacer algo incorrecto jajajaa sin embargo espero que te vaya muy bien en la iniciativa, saludos!

Hahaha hello, interesting to know this artistic side hahaha I thank you for the invitation but I'm not good at these things, I love to read them but I prefer to leave it to the experts, I respect literature a lot and I would panic to do something wrong hahaha however I hope you do very well in the initiative, greetings!

This is such a beautiful story, @flywithmarlin. Congratulations on winning the first place prize in the Cinnamon Cup Coffee contest! It is well deserved. This captured my heart.

Hello happy Saturday

What an honor for me to know that you liked my story, I made it with much affection for that great initiative they had in one of my favorite communities, they make with their creative writing challenges the imagination fly to the maximum.

Thank you very much for your beautiful congratulations, to see that my story captured your heart was something I loved to read.