I really liked this!! Such an essential being in love scene... How you showcase each lovers "faults", and then show us how they are so happy anyhow. That's what it's all about I think :). Valentine's day? It's everyday 💚
This read like a play 100%, but with the flair of short fiction. You're a star 😍
I think a good play uses the narrator to set the scene really well and uses stage directions so it 'reads' like a short story, if you know what I mean? So I was having fun experimenting with the form. Gee I love Hive for helping me push the envelope. Thanks so much @grindan, this is lovely coming from someone as high calibre a writer as yourself, and I beam every time you drop by..