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RE: Beyond the Abaya | عبایا کے اُس پار

in Hive Learners11 months ago

Realities are concealed behind the curtain, personality judgment are being accomplished in the same way Ayesha did but question is who compels peeps like Sophia to misapply the Abaya or the tag of pseudo-religious (of course it's the society which confines the daughter of Religious scholar to be in vail) Sorry to declare but this cover can't conceal the sin.... At the same spot the internal me is also regretting to all those who place awry questions on Abaya's..... Apart from all this what I loved is the character of the middleman who is here to show us the two faces of coin.... Loved the narration (read the Urdu because I felt it was the character buildup of Nimra's novels hehe) by the way animations are marvellous..... Last but not the least the Quranic verse just wow in fact Ma sha Allah💙

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I'm glad you found similarities between my writing style and that of Nimra Ahmed. Firstly, I prefer Umera Ahmed over Nimra Ahmed. Secondly, Nimra's novels tend to be lengthy, while I intentionally kept the story short to ensure clarity of purpose. Despite this, my writing style doesn't align closely with hers. However, there is one similarity: both of us reference the Quran and delve into complex Islamic issues. It's evident from the story that Ayesha's character was naive to believe that wearing the veil would conceal her sins. She shouldn't have at least said, 'Don't try to be like that girl wearing red lipstick.' which is also one of my favorite lines from the story aka 'Don't compare my morality with the color of my lipstick.' I get vibes every time I read this dialogue. Thank you for liking the animations. I've exhausted all my bing credits to find good images. Now, I'll have to gather more points to create more images. I'm glad you liked the story. When are you starting to write? I hope your pen hasn't rusted yet.