Let's escape from the world for a moment

in Freewriters25 days ago

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Let's escape from the world for a moment,
where noise and haste are stilled,
let's form an instant of our own,
like a whisper that the wind projects.
Under the sky that covers our shadows
we'll dance among dreams and stars,
and in the breeze that softly names us,
we will find the echo of our footsteps.
Let us give each other the love we have,
with words that flow from the soul,
a kiss that stops fears,
like a snail keeps its harmony at home.
Let's stop the clock from ticking relentlessly,
and let the instant expand;

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This is absolutely beautiful! I love how you capture the idea of escaping the noise of the world and creating a peaceful, intimate moment. The imagery of dancing among dreams and stars, and the softness of the breeze calling your names, is so calming and serene. The way you describe love flowing from the soul and stopping fears with a kiss really adds to the sense of comfort and harmony. Such a lovely, poetic escape from the chaos of everyday life. Wonderful work!

Thank you for your comment, love is wonderful