Mi primer cuento corto My first short story

in Freewriters2 years ago (edited)

Muy buenas tardes a todos espero que se encuentren bien, hoy decidí postiar mi primer cuento corto espero que le encanten como quedo ya que no estoy muy adiestrado en utilizar la plataforma de hive, si de casualidad hay alguien que le gustaria aportar su granito de arena bienvenidos son, cualquier ayudita que opinen sobre como usar la plataforma, tips de ayudas es lo suficiente. Actualmente estoy utilizando la aplicación de @ecency para android. Esta aplicación de veras se lo recomiendo al 100% debido a lo facil que es utilizarlo.

Sandra y el fantasma del armario

Sandra siempre dormía con una luz en su mesa de noche, y una lampara que ilumina el interior de su armario. Desde que tenia cuatro años estaba convencida que un monstruo vivía en su cuarto, aunque Sandra ya tenia ocho años, seguía convencida de la misma historia, a pesar de nunca haberlo visto con sus propios ojos. La noche del nueve de agosto aquello cambiaria, pues cuando Sandra ya estaba acostada a las once y quince de la noche, un ruido extraño le despertó de un sobresalto.
El tintineo fue en aumento, aquel sonido era como el de una esfera de cristal golpeando repetidamente sobre el suelo, como si jugasen a lanzarla una y otra vez. Sandra se sentó en su cama, con el corazón latiendo a mil por hora, sin saber qué hacer, pero con la mirada clavada en el armario.
De pronto el ruido se detuvo y una risa graciosa rompió el breve silencio que se había creado. Sandra sintió un escalofrió recorrerle la espalada y acto seguido la luz que alumbraba su armario se apagó.

  • Hola – se escuchó la voz de un niño.

Sandra se quedó petrificada, su cuerpo era incapaz de moverse y su mente estaba en blanco. Ni siquiera el miedo la terminaba de dominar. Una pequeña mano se mostró desde el interior del closet, una mano bastante rosada y pequeña, con una pelota en la mano extendida que parecía ofrecerle a la inmóvil niña.
Sandra no pudo recordar cómo se quedó dormida ni qué paso después de aquello. A la mañana siguiente despertó tan alarmada, que al salir corriendo de la habitación para contarle a sus padres lo ocurrido, ignoró que frente al armario estaba tirada en el suelo una pelota desconocida. Desde aquella tenebrosa noche, el tintineo no se escuchó nunca más.

English

Good afternoon everyone I hope you are doing well, today I decided to post my first short story, I hope you like how it turned out since I am not very trained in using the hive platform, if by any chance there is someone who would like to contribute their grain of sand You are welcome, any help that you think about how to use the platform, tips as well about the plataform. I am currently using the @ecency app for android. I really recommend this application 100% due to how easy it is to use it.

Sandra and the ghost in the closet

Sandra always slept with a light on her nightstand, and a lamp that illuminates the inside of her closet. Since she was four years old she was convinced that a monster lived in her room, although Sandra was already eight years old, she was still convinced of the same story, despite never having seen it with her own eyes. The night of August 9 that would change, because when Sandra was already in bed at eleven fifteen at night, a strange noise woke her up with a start. The tinkling was increasing, that sound was like that of a glass sphere hitting the ground repeatedly, as if they were playing throw it over and over again. Sandra sat on her bed, her heart beating a thousand miles an hour, not knowing what to do, but staring at the closet. Suddenly the noise stopped and a funny laugh broke the brief silence that had been created. Sandra felt a shiver run down her spine and then the light that illuminated her closet went out.

  • Hello - a child's voice was heard.

Sandra froze, her body unable to move and her mind blank. Not even the fear finished dominating her. A small hand appeared from inside the closet, a rather pink and small hand, with a ball in the outstretched hand that seemed to be offered to the motionless girl. Sandra couldn't remember how she fell asleep or what happened after that. The next morning she woke up so alarmed that when she ran out of the room to tell her parents what had happened, she ignored the fact that an unknown ball was lying on the floor in front of the closet. Since that dark night, the tinkling was never heard again.

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