she's heavy with sorrow,
her heartache is palpable,
it's depth, hard to swallow.
being a second choice;
though she quiets her voice,
trying to fit into this new category.
maybe he doesn't give a fuck?
Why would he act as if trapped,
eager to leave as if he'd been stabbed?
Why he treats her this way?
This love, so beautiful,
will soon begin to decay.
but, sadly, it's nowhere in sight,
a girlfriend for the weekend,
her heartache reaches its height.
always feeling second-best,
the happiness she desires,
will require another quest.
cause she's sunk into deep;
her heart and brain are at war,
her spirit ready to take flight.
That is real and pure and true,
and when it comes to her doorstep,
her heart, once again, will renew.
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Sometimes everything we give our best seem to come crashing, I understand her feelings but someday she do meet with the right one for her. A great poem here friend
Usually after each crash, the sun starts shining, doesn't it? Thanks for stopping by!
Yeah, it's always that way
The way you vividly depict the inner turmoil and heartache of the protagonist is truly remarkable.
Thank you for sharing this powerful piece with us.
Thank you for your reading it and taking the time to leave a comment. It's always rewarding to get feedback from your readers. ;0)