A pawn she think she’s become Victim of affection A tool for defection Having rainy tears for attention Making herself a victim of detention
But little did she know
That a soul waits for redemption Having cloud of thought for her attention But stock in a mountain of aggression from her Making him yawn, yearn for dawn So he can see her beautiful smile or frown
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I love the rhymes and the story line. I didn't quite get the ending well though. Was he physically abusing her?
Thanks for sharing this.
It is actually what you make of it, every reader has his own story or understanding of the poem
I know every poem is open to interpretation. But I was just curious what the inspiration behind it was and what was going through your mind when you wrote the words.
Anyways, thanks
WOW! Your words are so touching, can you imagine the rhyming 🤗.
This is what I really need for the day, you got my attention 👍
Thanks, appreciate it
You are welcome
Very good reflection in your poem and very cool images, made me reflect a lot, thanks for sharing.