Diagnosis

in Blockchain Poets2 months ago
Authored by @Pea

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Diagnosis

borderline
seems like I’m
going to lose
my mind
cause you keep on
pushing my brain into the borderline
I’m marginal
indefinite
uncertain
unsure
unsettled
undecided
up in the air
doubtful
problematic
indeterminate
unclassifiable
ambivalent
equivocal
questionable
disputable
debatable
arguable
controversial
contentious
moot
open to doubt
open to question
because that personality test
said that I have
something to do with
a line marking a border
I’m on the edge
I’m an outer part
I’m a narrow bed of planted ground
I’m a plain or decorative margin around printed matter
blah blah blah
childhood trauma
and yes, I stole from Madonna

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haha I enjoyed reading this. Was it a freewrite? It's very good.

I loathe psychological labels, they are terribly dangerous, and a kind of being careful what you wish for.

Stay away from shrinks!!

Madonna has plenty. Steal away.

Fun poem.

Is that your painting? It's also very good.

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Very striking poem, I had a little fun reading it, many times people are a little mysterious and that kind of people you have to be a little careful, I really liked this writing, thanks for sharing ☺

Why did I laugh when I got to the blah blah blah part? Was I really suppose to laugh?.. Sorry about that.. Just keep writing.