Temptation.
I feel you pull away,
drawn in by the negative energies
that swirl around you,
that threaten to consume you,
the empty promises,
that feed into your false sense of security.
I feel compelled, to keep you close,
yet I know that in doing so,
you will continue to spiral,
to lose your footing in this reality.
And then,
comes this desire to let go, the weight that pulls you under,
the expectations, that arise,
that feed into your insecurities,
Your fears,
they rise to the surface
and I fear you will drown.
The light that surrounds,
illuminating the darkness within.
Oye, es bastante el sentir de este escrito. Cuando estamos consternados por algo o quizás muchas depresiones siempre se tiende a caer en desganos que nos llevan a un abismo y no nos percatamos que somos en nuestro interior hay luz y energía que podrían salvarnos si reccionamos a tiempo pero muchas veces los prejuicios nos dominan. Por ello tenemos que procurar liberarnos de esas cargas tan pesadas que nos llevan a un destino desconcertado. Gracias por compartir.
Gracias por tus palabras, por sumergirte en lo más profundo.
Very cool poem, usually we always want the best for all our loved ones and close ones that if they fall into any temptation or any vice affects us a little in part, as long as it is within our reach we can help people by talking and make them feel good so they do not enter the world of darkness, very cool poem as always, hugs and blessings ♥
Thanks so much @joseitosanchezs, I always appreciate your feedback. I have not been so active on here recently. I hope you are well xx
This is a powerful poem that captures the pain of watching someone struggle. Honestly, it's always hard to know when to hold on and when to let go and I can totally relate to that feeling of wanting to help someone but knowing you might have to let go.
Keep writing.
Thank you David xxx
You are welcome.. I noticed you have not been writing the way you used to write for about a week now. Hope all is well