This is so delightful, @stormlight24. It is as though the story poured from you effortlessly. There is magic in your words and in your ability to transport us into a world where dragon snakes and mages are possible.

Your story falls into the class of tales suitable for young and adult audiences alike. That's a rare skill. Fantasy and sophistication all in one.

I really, really like this story and would have loved it if I came across it in my grade school reader. Thanks for the trip :)