How I wish

in The Ink Well3 months ago

When I entered that place everything was very confusing. First, there was a pamphlet flying in front of my eyes, let's see, it says... Welcome! and it flew, and flew around me. I tried to grab it, this way of mine of wanting to have everything in control. I ventured and kept walking in that place. And second...

I entered this place very much like a park but, a forgotten park inside a forest.


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Fun

All this inside a forest?

What's wrong with me?

Why do I see all this?

It's just not possible!

And there it was, a forgotten park in the middle of the jungle.

Did someone leave this here?

Maybe they couldn't move all this equipment to another place. It was left here. There are the crash carts over there. I love them... I used to ride one of those and crash into all the cars that passed around me, hahaha what a childhood memory.

The roller coaster, which by the way I never knew why it has this name. In Russia, there are mountains like this? The truth is that I hate it. I don't like to go up to heights and then go down so fast that my heart almost comes out of my mouth, besides other things that are inside my body.

Target shooting, I never hit it. Horseshoe throwing, no idea because my shot never hit it. And that machine, the one that grabs things with a clamp that hangs from a mechanical arm.

It is like this: You place a coin in it then it activates a mechanism, which you direct from a control outside the machine, until you reach an object of your liking and when you hold it and draw it to the place where you are supposed to win it, the mechanical device opens and releases the object; you lose it.

It's frustrating! Another coin and another frustration, the thing is that you have to invest a lot of coins for a game that doesn't allow you to get the prize.

And the animals! - All the animals in the zoo - I like the Llamas, of course if they don't spit at me.

The elephants, but they look too thin. And the lions, the zebras, the hippos. I keep my tortoise and my cat, the rest is very complicated.

But everything looks very deteriorated. I hadn't seen a park for a long time. I kept it alive in my memory for many years. Today I see it again, but like this, so out of this world.

Of course, if it were that otherworldly. I think your amusement park would be like that. But I am in this world and I see this park lying in the middle of nowhere. All dilapidated.

And I'm all alone. Where are my family and friends?

Why am I alone in this park?

I think this is a nightmare. The last thing I remember is that I went to class and now I'm in the jungle and in an abandoned and destroyed park.

That sound... what is that sound?

riiiiiiiiiiiss, riiiiiiiiiiiss, it's getting closer and closer. Francisss, Francis, ah that's me.

What happened?

I open my eyes, I'm on the floor and people are all around me calling me.

Oh well, thank God it was all a nightmare. As I got off the school bus, the bad guy threw a ball at me, it landed on my head and I landed on the floor.

Everyone calling me, Francis, Francis. They woke me up from my lethargy. I suffered a little fainting. I don't know how long, but I came back from my crazy dream or nightmare ride. I think my nightmare was better than what I see here now.

Now I am heading to my classes... very boring!

Now looking at it better, I think I prefer to keep dreaming in the park...

How I wish!


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A very entertaining story to read. You built suspense throughout the entire story, leading us to what had really happened to Francisco.

Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Good day.

It is a simple story, with very little suspense. To create, you just need a little imagination and let yourself go. For the moment I could only imagine something simple. Thank you very much for your words.

Hi @gertu ,You are right to think the name of the roller coaster, precisely derived its name from this country RUSIA, its slides that people enjoyed in the winter
I wish you a happy weekend

Hola cariño, cómo has estado? Muy buena tu información, la tendré presente. Feliz fin de semana para ti también.

Me encanta verla , la estoy siguiendo , así que NO se me esconda hahaha, tranquila que la sigo pero NO le voy a robar nada hahaha, y la sigo despacio para no asustarla .
Mejor no hago mis bromas pesadas .
Un fuerte abrazo con mucho respeto y afecto por supuesto

Tranquilo que si me acosas tengo quien me defienda. Tengo a un gato salvaje en mi casa y el no dejará que te acerques a mí. Antes que eso suceda sentirás el zarpazo en tus nachas.😂

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Thank you very much, I keep trying.

That's great @gertu! We're excited to see your accomplishments on Hive! We keep cheering you on for your next goal!

hello @gertu. A few things to note after reading your submission. The Ink Well requires all writers to support at least two other writers/stories in The Ink Well each time they submit a story of their own. It is a requirement in order to be eligible for curation. We also recommend that all stories meet the minimum word count of 750 words as those that are shorter tend to be underdeveloped. Stories also need to meet certain minimum requirements in order to garner higher levels of curation. You can find Ink Well fiction resources here

Thank you very much for reminding me, I will keep it in mind, although I often forget, as time goes by. My apologies for my mistakes.