Hello, @gertu ! As far as I see this is your second post on The Ink Well. Your writing is very thoughtful and you put a lot of effort into building your story. Perhaps it would behoove you to read some of the stories that get better rewards. Your writing is dense, almost poetic, but if you consider the rules you will see that we favor complete stories. Stories with an introduction, a development and a denouement. Stories, with descriptions and dialogues, with actions, where something happens (a knot) and changes the protagonist. I hope to see your next stories in our community. Welcome back.
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Thanks for stopping by and checking out my publication. Thank you for your suggestions. I will try to take note of your appreciations. I can only say in my favor that this is my personal way of seeing things. It has been many years of writing what comes out of my mind without rules or recommendations until now.
I will try to learn new ways. Again, thank you very much for your effort in reading.