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Hard works pays, interesting story about life, happy Sunday to you my friend..

Hello @newton666, as you know, we are a community centered around quality short stories. We ask that you look over our rules, which may be found at the top of the community page, or within any post by The Ink Well.

We would also like to encourage you to make use of our catalog of fiction writing tips. You will find guidance on how to build characters, integrate action and dialog, write story plots and add a story arc. Without a story arc and some dialogue, stories do not seem complete. Good luck and keep writing!