@jayna, I am not 80 years old, I am just 39 years old. if it is fiction, I correct the words and the truth is that I like to be corrected so I can improve, I thank you for your advice that is very helpful for me, if you see that I have mistakes please tell me so I can correct it. Thank you for reading my story and for the next one I will add a narrative arc, I didn't realize that I missed that.