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What a beautiful story of morals
I love that the treasure mawa had was inside of him and that’s what the current world need the most
Kindness and people that can connect with each other no matter the color or language.

This is a nice write up. I love the use of your words and it helps with my imaginations
Nice work dear

I like how Mawa is initially doubtful of his own worth, making his growth into the worthy heir more satisfying. Keep writing.

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