You did the right thing, certainly! The way in which boys are trained to become men in different parts of the world is a bit shocking sometimes. But the fact is, that kind of approach and attitude happen everywhere. That is why it's so important for women to stand up for themselves! Thank you for sharing your creative nonfiction story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.

One bit of feedback: The last line in your story is written twice.