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RE: Tiwa, my worst nightmare.

in The Ink Well2 months ago

You begin the piece well--you provide motivation for the actions that will follow. You wanted to have fun. The announcement of the MC, that one could not decline an invitation, sealed your fate with Tiwa. She was looking for a target and you were convenient.

Staying with her overnight was probably not a wise move, but you were a freshman and rather green. You resolve the piece satisfactorily, but telling us of Tiwa's death. It seems you had a lucky escape.

Thank you for sharing this with us, @holler (one note: you probably mean 'fateful', rather than 'faithful' day).

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Thank you for having me, corrections duly noted.