Hello @ji33y, This story has a strong narrative arc and you explain the characters' motivation well. You certainly do address the prompt, inheritance. One thing you should be careful around is the violence. Setting someone 'ablaze' is pretty graphic. If you could tone that down somehow and in the future avoid such vividly violent images, it would be more compliant with the Ink Well culture.

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