That is a truly effective story, a yarn told by someone with feeling. We have a sense of this woman's history, from your telling. We can hear the grandmother's voice as we read. There are mistakes in the story that distract us, but these do not spoil the narrative. Except for these errors, it is a tale told with pleasing flow.

Of course, by the end of the story we all love the grandmother and would also gladly sit and listen to another of her stories.

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