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RE: Nkem And The Three Spirits

in The Ink Well2 years ago

You certainly capture the essence of ambition untamed in your story. It is a tragic story, and yet there seems to be a moral. Still, the Nkem's stubbornness is cruelly punished.

You describe your character well and put us in the scene. We feel the distress of not only our narrator but also of Nkem. Thank you for sharing this with us. We appreciate that you engage with other writers in the community, @tozill .