Fabulous construction of a fantasy world! Interesting characters and great dialogue.
Creative dynamic between enemy camps and imaginative development of a “blocking force” - The Dark Reflector! I would have been ideal if we could have known a little more about the motives behind planson’s treasonous actions (great name, though), it would’ve rounded out the arc perfectly.
We appreciate the effort you put into the community.
Thanks so much, I might just edit that :) ... If I do, who should I tag?