Ouuu... I'm a sucker for a good magical adventure story and this did the trick!
I must commend you on the detailing in this story though. Especially the scenes when Derrick receives the package. I truly felt like I
delved into the same room and mind as Derrick witnessing his enthusiasm for those Magik cards.
Overall... Awesome story! I hope the true believer actually conquers those many worlds triumphantly!!
Thank you, @zeraton, very kind words indeed.
I love it when you can fall into a story and feel like you are there, it takes an open mind as well as a good story.