Hi guys, as you know I am always busy working on music and producing new songs, but as it takes a long time to complete a project I decided to post review about other songs until today which I am posting this new original song, this song is called "The Straw Man's Claws" and it is an original music by me and my friend Michael Evans, It has changed so much from its first version, because I first produce this music in 2019 I think, but we started to work on it lately and after some months it became ready, Michael wrote a great lyrics and recorded his vocals for it and I also recorded back vocals and some rap parts and Vocal fry in some parts.
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You can also listen to this song from the link below:
https://davoodfaramarzi.com/michael-evans-davood-faramarzi-straw-mans-claws-original-song-2020/
The photo art is also done by me, I used some free for commercial use photos and created this piece of art.
The song has a message which it relates to our situation in today's world, I let you read the lyrics and listen to the music, cause it is more better.
Lyrics:
When the conversation dies
The fools have left their mark
Now our world is strewn apart
In solemn dreams, I have searched for you
Hope never dies , even at dark
The dam of lies is breaking, the truths escaping
It can't be stopped, the mask comes off
To show the world this isn't who we are
Nothing more groundbreaking- The Straw Man's Claws
Arise the fall, the curtain call will show us on our way!
Ripping thru the stratosphere up above the stars
Godspeed past the moon on our way out to Mars
In this imagined life we are no one's imitations
This is our reality with no limitations
In solemn dreams I have searched for you
Hope never dies, even at dark
Ripping thru the stratosphere up above the stars
Godspeed past the moon on our way out to Mars
In this imagined life we are no one's imitations
This is our reality with no limitations (x2)
The dam of lies is breaking, the truths escaping
It can't be stopped, the mask comes off
To show the world this isn't who we are
Nothing more groundbreaking- The Straw Man's Claws
Arise the fall, the curtain call will show us on our way! (x2)
Ripping thru the stratosphere up above the stars
Godspeed past the moon on our way out to Mars
In this imagined life we are no one's imitations
This is our reality with no limitations
Thanks for listening,
Davood Faramarzi aka @davidfar
Always my pleasure to work with you my brutha 🤟 The song turned out great!
Thanks brother, it is my pleasure too :) \m/
Wow guys, this is a really great sound from you, so PRO!!! Love it!!!
Thank you so much Lynds, it means much to me, :D glad you liked it
Its not official until @lynds chimes in! Always means the most that you approve 👍
It was GREAT! Can't wait to show the boys when they get home 😁
Great song! The first section from 0:56 to 1:22 reminded me a bit of Dream Theater. I really liked the riff that sounds when you start singing "In solemn dreams I have searched for you. Hope never dies, even at dark" (from 1:39 to 2:15). The sound quality is excellent.
Thank you so much :) I am glad you liked it. also thank you for the kind review \mm/
You're welcome😊. I started to see your profile and I noticed that you usually publish a lot of music content, I recommend you to share it doing cross-post in the Hivesicians community, there is accumulating good music content of Hive.
Thank you so much, I am glad you liked them too :D, I thought that they only accept my own songs, so I did not post those reviews in there :), but I will do it now. Thanks
Everything is accepted there, reviwes, playlist, tops, as long as they are related to music. In fact, there is a contest purely to discuss topics related to music (LET'S ARGUE), and there is also another performance contest (LET'S JAM). The spectrum is wide. You are welcome.
Hey, we would prefer it if you could post your "music" post in the HIVESICIANS community as we're trying to help grow a diverse set of niche communities so readers can get a better community trending page as mentioned in The OCD community, for a list of the communities we're curating right now please check OCD Communities Incubation Program - Update #6.
You are welcome to cross-post your posts from that community onto OCD with the peakd.com feature to get more visibility and engagement from the OCD subscribers.
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Thank you so much, I will do that :) I was not aware of that community.
¡Hello @davidfar!
Your song is so good. One can tell that you are a music producer, it sounds really nice. Your friend sings excellent and the background vocals are also very well done. Good job!
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Thank you so much for the kind feedback, I am glad you liked this song, sure, I will do it :)