Throw back film work from mobile to DSLR

Throw back to my old work
A short film I did, early in my career. Looking back, it could be way better, but I am happy with it because it did open up opportunities for me.

This was the remake done for another festival that requested we do it over to be screened in theatres.

This is the original done with a cellphone. It won me an award in a 1 minute film competition. Let me know what you think in the comments.