My heart is racing with speed right now in utmost gear
Your soft whispers in my ears, in my dreams, everyday I want to hear
Tomorrow has no hold on me because with your love I have nothing to fear
You are my inspiration, my endless release, my addition and my sweet jeer
I cherish you even more than life itself or one of my favourite fruits, the pear
Oh, I keep counting down and not long before in my arms, with you I will hold near
And with you and through you, my popsicle, beautiful children I will rear, yes rear
Ofcourse, I know we are super humans and not deer
I think I am high on you and I don't even drink beer
I love you to the moon back and forth my sweet fluffy bear
Special, that's what I call you and to me, you are
You filled my heart with so much gladness and the soul with care
Oh with you, there is nobody that comes close and I couldn't dare
You gave me courage to move ahead and I know no fear
I could rip open my heart and lay it all bare, for you, my dear
Gladly laid bare and open, still beating for you with not a single tear
Because you love me more too, just like a lady loves her teddy bear
They say that love is a feeling you feel when you feel you are feeling a feeling like you have never felt before. True love indeed have no class barrier. Love is such a beautiful thing that no one can ever deny no matter how it is conceived.
I have seen people fall in love in the library...some in Church, some even in a mall...for some it is a simple glance in unconventional places but the one I noticed last were two young people who fell in love at the zoo...and the hippopotamus is my witness hahahaha.
Thank you for your time.
My pen doesn't bleed, it speaks, with speed and ease.
Still me,
My tongue is like the pen of a ready writer.
Olawalium; (Love's chemical content, in human form). Take a dose today; doctor's order.
I am always excited when I see people take the vows to be together. Every step in itself is a memory they should cherish because those are the memories they would hold on to every step of the way.
Love is beautiful and sweet and it's worth getting into. You just know how to make someone fall in love all over again with your words succinctly. I enjoyed the poem with the humour at the end too haha
Absolutely! Love is beautiful and sweet. Yes, it's worth getting into because it's a whole world of new experiences on it's own. Love is amazing and worth feeling.
Thank you very much for your kind words. Deeply appreciated. Glad you enjoyed that humour at the end. Make the Hippopotamus come explain give us o. Hahaha
You got me laughing at the end, a Hippo as a witness?
Love is indeed a beautiful thing and when you find it, it automatically completes you. Christ love, family love, spouse love, friends love; they all mean a lot to me and cherish them wholeheartedly.
The feeling is incomparable to other feelings, ❤️
😂😂 that part got me laughing while reading it too. We need to ask him to take us to the hippopotamus so we can confirm something 😂🤣
🤣🤣😂🤣🤣😂 hopefully the Hippopotamus would still be alive because that was many years ago and oh well...are you all ready for the trip? 😂😂🤣
Hahahaha yes we are ready. Would be nice to hear what the Hippopotamus has to say and his own view of what love means hahaha. Nice one.
Lolz, I hope it's an Hippo that has got speaking ability else there won't be any evidence and he will just explain taya. 😂😂😂😂😂
You go explain tire 🤣🤣 as there is no evidence. For that day, that Hippo must talk o 🤣
🤣🤣😂🤣🤣🤣😂 no evidence...we go explain taya 😂😂🤣🤣. We have to speak to the zoo keeper who understands the language of the Hippopotamus 🤣😂🤣
Lolz, that's another thing to consider. Let's hope the zoo keeper understands, happy Wednesday sir.
Hahahaha the zoo keeper better understands else I would be tagged a liar hahahaha.
Hope your day is going great bro?
It's awesome sir, there was a heavy downpour overnight and it made the weather really cool.
You go explain tire o. No evidence as Burna boy would say.
Hahaha I am glad I did, brother. Just felt like mixing humour with love together and I am glad it did the trick. Love is so beautiful and those who find it should cherish it. Love is so precious and should be guarded. Thank you, brother.
I feel really touch reading this beautiful lines and trust me it is a beautiful thing to admire and see that one is with the right person in love. Love is truly a beautiful thing most especially when you are with the right person
Love works best when we do love with the right person...it takes away every insecurities and gives one the freedom to love without any restriction. Love is indeed beautiful.
Thank you very much for your kind words and appreciation.
Perfectly true. Instead of meeting wrong people and regretting of love display, it is quite better to be with the right person as it is necessary. That insecurities have so much drive a lot of people away from the relationship or broken a lot of relationships which is not supposed to be so. Love is indeed beautiful when we are with the right person.
What everyone who want to show love is to make sure that they are with the right person. It helps to settle a lot of things
You're absolutely right about love. It doesn't require any status or wealth. The strength of a bond initiated in a zoo and witnessed by a hippo is truly remarkable. 😁
Hahaha absolutely remarkable. Yes, my friend...true love has no wealth or class barrier. Thank you.
This lines feel so spiritual, I love the wording and I believe in all of them. Love is felt most when it's genuine
Thank you so much for your appreciation of the poetry. Yes, I love rhymes and try to make them line up to make sense.
Indeed boss, I can see it clearly and I really want to see more coming
Thank you very much. Deeply appreciate this.
You're welcome boss 🫱🏾🫲🏿
I am already blushing right here imagining this was written for me. Those lines actually communicated strong message and love is really a beautiful thing and feeling most especially when you are with the right person. It gives that perfect match
When you are with the right person, everything falls into place and the joy is contagious...one of a kind and rare. Love is so beautiful and don't worry, you will have poems written for you every single day when that guy comes. 🥰🥰😍😍😍
Perfectly true. I can vividly understand that feeling. The best thing that can ever happen to someone in love is to be with the right person. Everything fall into places just as you said and there is no need to be sad. There is quite peace and joy and that is the type of relationship everyone should strive to have
It makes sense with the right person, absolutely... You know when it's with someone who feels the same way about you, there is no need to hide or feel insecured...and you have that freedom to be yourself.
Perfectly true. Why a lot of people are having issue in their relationship is because they are with the wrong person. When you are with the right person, it actually makes things more easy in the relationship. The right person or been with the right one makes love more beautiful to enjoyed
Awnnn🥺.
I love the last stanza "you fell in love in a zoo and the hippopotampus is your witness. " Truly love is beautiful but only with the right person.
Nice lines, there were quite creative
I am glad you enjoyed it and thanks for taking your time to appreciate it as well. It means a lot and I am grateful.
My pleasure. Thank you also for your reflective words, they speak volumes.
Greetings!
Love is pure magic my friend, love is what moves the world and when you find the right person it is so much more, it is the perfect complement to the human being, it is something that exceeds all understanding, I think it is one of the few things that become extinct in the world, beautiful writing my friend ☺
PS: You have to go visit that Hippopotamus to ask him ♥
Love is beautiful and magical. Capable of making us do what we never thought we could. Love is sweet especially when it is reciprocated and with the right person.
Thank you very much.
Hahaha yes, are you ready for the visit?
Well yes, love has many meanings and you could say that many crazy things are done for it and I already have many anecdotes about it xD, I love love love and all that it can cause in one ♥
I hope you showed your wife this poem cos I know she’s the one you wrote it for so let me go and find my husband in peace
Hahaha she's used to my poetry and she knows I can be dynamic in my ways and my words. Thank you very much, deeply appreciated.
Hahaha you will both find each other, don't worry.
hahahaha, I'll ask the hippo hahaha
Hahaha please do... Thankfully that's my witness and the zoo keeper can help us interpret what the Hippopotamus would say.